ETERNAL LINKS
She said she was his.
Tall mountains and wide oceans
will endure eternally
He held her tightly.
Sweeping plains and spacious skies
are linked together always.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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- Comment from author about the poem: My version of a sedoka plus a bit of scribble
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Aw bless and thanks for saving it - I was going to post another edone but changed my mind at the last moment. Glad I did - common theme for the day.
I am honoured yet again. 🙂 🙂
Very good write Michael.
I believe that I have seen that brilliant scribble, or one in the same style, on a previous occasion, it is still very good.
Yes I have posted it before but I am out of new stuff might do a few more of these. Thanks for the comment.
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love Sedokas better than TANKAS because the give an opportunity for a Double Entendre ! Eternal Love (uncommon these days !) but a great Message from the MUSE ! SANTITA and I have collaborated on another FUSION ~ DRINK ! My opening gambit was MILK (including Lait de Mere !) and SANTITA has reposted with Coffee laced with CAFFIENE ! (I knew she was on something !) What is your fave tipple ? Yours BRIAN Love the painting ~ reminded me of CIDER JARS ~ OK I am registered with AA along wit Steve the Sherry ! B.
Yes you should REGISTER EDONE it produce such a sklnny shape ! B.
Thank you Brian and yes will register it - hope they accept - not sure how it works as I haven't done this before but worth a try.
A fine write and pic M. Doh! I thought it was a Sudoku, or whatever those number puzzles are called. I can't do them. They bore me!
But I love them - something to do when the TV's on. Cheers O
Fun scribble & another fine poem
I do enjoy a bit of scribble - thanks for your comment Bill.
"endure eternally", how wonderful will that be. The poem takes my mind.
Are there two vases or two souls in the paint.
Thanks m&m - two souls or so I like to think - thanks for looking in and for your kind support.
Michael, not only are you showing us how to count, you are also teaching us how to use the words right and how to cram an awful lot of meaning into a few lines!
Great!
Thanks Fred - I studied numbers at school LoL 🙂 Thanks once again for your kind words.
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