dusk arising

renzi

 

 

there used to be a wonderful poet on here
every day a new piece of her life would appear
with a way about her, she stood out from the crowd
you could certanly say she lived her life loud
exciting or mundane, happy or sad
poetically she'd tell of the day she'd had
Showing us the pain of her anorexia
seeing her specialist really depressed her
hated the thought of being fat fat fat
so made me laugh to comment on that
but sadly one day her life fell apart
she told us plainly he'd broken her heart
now we never see that lady on here
and i always look, hoping she'll reappear
she's a natural born poet, definately gifted
to see her writing again we'd all be uplifted
so if any of you poets know how to get in touch
tell her we miss her.........  very much

Comments18

  • Louis Gibbs

    I share your concern for Renzi. She is a gifted poet and a very special lady. Hopefully she will come back to her poetic family ... I miss her too.

    • dusk arising

      Thanks for commenting, see FredPeyer's comment below, he's heard from Renzy.

      • Louis Gibbs

        I did read Fred's comment and it is very encouraging! Thanks.

      • Goldfinch60

        I also share your concern, she is a wonderful lady and I miss her on the site.

        • dusk arising

          Thanks for commenting, see FredPeyer's comment below, he's heard from Renzy.

          • Goldfinch60

            I have also had a PM from Renzi after I contacted her.

          • Shine

            Beautiful poem, dusk arising. It made me long for all of my friends from school that each went their separate ways.

          • LAWLESS

            Yes it is sad when we see poets disappear. Another fine poet that left us was Augustus, last time I heard from him he was on his death bed. He wrote very insightful poems about reaching his final days. I miss him and am sure he is in a better place.

          • Michael Edwards

            I've also missed her poems - she was so fresh and honest and open my heart went out her - let's hope we see her again soon.

            • dusk arising

              Thanks for commenting, see FredPeyer's comment below, he's heard from Renzy.

            • sue.evans

              A lovely accolade to the person you seek😊

            • malubotelho

              Yes, well remembered. Renzi, we are still waiting and loving you. I remember her. I miss her work and look for it. I'm worried for her and other fellows friend that disappeared also. I remember Pauly. I was worried because he told me he is taking 30 something Benadryl. This scarys me. I feel so sorry for them. Thanks DA. For the reminder.

              • dusk arising

                Thanks for commenting, see FredPeyer's comment below, he's heard from Renzy.

              • Christina8

                I really miss Renzi. Thank you for writing this wonderful poem. I think she is missed by many on MPS!!

                • dusk arising

                  Thanks for commenting, see FredPeyer's comment below, he's heard from Renzy.

                • Candlewitch

                  I miss Renzi, too...I hope she is okay and will return to us soon.

                  *hugs, Cat
                  ever, eddy

                  • dusk arising

                    Thanks for commenting, see FredPeyer's comment below, he's heard from Renzy.

                    • Candlewitch

                      thanks!

                      *hugs, Cat

                    • myself and me

                      Wish her the best, and hope she return one day and if she happen to read this poem, she shall know, we miss her.

                      • dusk arising

                        Thanks for commenting, see FredPeyer's comment below, he's heard from Renzy.

                      • FredPeyer

                        Just happened to get a message from her TODAY! Said she will try to write again and hopefully we can read something from her soon! Don't know how to make this message available to all who commented.

                        • dusk arising

                          Oh Fred thats really good news,,,, Synchronicity ??? or what. I can't really tell you why i wrote this today, I do hope she sees it and is encouraged. Of course she doesn't know me as dusk arising, i had my other name when she was writing in here. WOW!

                          • dusk arising

                            I have all those commenting who know renzy's work to read your comment.

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                          • LukeCoomer

                            I don't know Renzi but from the sounds of her I wish I had
                            Great write!

                          • Renzi

                            Oh my goodness.. this has actually just brought the warmest smile to my face. Incredible💗 Thankyou so much.. ahhh i miss you guys. And reading your great work. Ranting about my crazy life haha) You are all amazing people.. and this wee poem. I feel so honoured to be reading it today.
                            Thankyou so much. Truely beautiful!
                            I'M COMING BACK 💗

                            • dusk arising

                              So pleased to read that Renzi, looking forward to your post already.

                            • Candlewitch

                              dear Renzi,

                              I, for one am so happy to read that you are okay and coming back to our family of poets!!!

                              *Huge hugs, Cat

                            • Mugsdaddy

                              Thank you for turning me on to Renzi she is a great writer.

                              • dusk arising

                                You can see why she has been missed then. The good news is she has been in touch and promises to return to us. Thanks for commenting.

                              • Viv Wade

                                A lovely tribute to your friend, and so happy to read all the comments below and see that she has re-appeared! I hope Renzi knows how lucky she is to have so many people who care about her!

                              • Neville

                                I never knew her, or had the pleasure of her words but I have known a few Renzi's and I don't mean that to appear flippant... There are some folk who for one reason or another, tend to have a marked, even profound effect on those who encounter them during the course of their lives... some of these same folk have personal issues that may serve as a creative driver.. whatever the case, Renzi is a much admired individual whose talent obviously brought a little sunshine into the lives of so many... I can only conclude by wishing her well and emphasising that whilst eating disorders are never, if ever resolved overnight, I have personally worked with so many over the years who have responded positively to appropriate interventions and support.... Oh' and thanks Dusk Arising for introducing me to a fine fellow poet..... Neville

                              • dusk arising

                                And thank you very much for reminding me of Renzi. i am going to re-publish this same poem again today in a plea to those on here who know how to contact her. Hoping we may see some of her work again and hear of her well being.

                                • Neville

                                  an absolute pleasure and good luck.... N



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