She Fever Too.

Goldfinch60



I must go and see she again, to the lovely she and her pie,

And all I ask is a big plate with a fork to eat it by,

And the sauce is thick and meats cooked in her so fine baking,

And the red wine in the large glass, and my thirst there for slaking.

 

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 5th, 2017 01:44
  • Comment from author about the poem: Fay wrote a poem called She-Fever. It got me thinking about Sea Fever by John Masefield the only poem that I remember from my school years. So I have adapted the first verse of that poem.
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 45
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  • Mugsdaddy

    I think I may have a dirty mind as this poem spoke to me way beyond the words.

    • Goldfinch60

      I did wonder when I wrote it but it was meant as a clean write.

    • FredPeyer

      Goldfinch, dirty mind or not, red wine or not, meats or not, YOU baked a pretty impressive poem! Love it!

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Fred, John Masefield was a good guide in this instance.

      • Fay Slimm.

        Ha ha - you wrote your fill in this yummy version dear Goldie. Great read.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thanks Fay, it all came from your write yesterday.

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          Thnaks for the Memory ANDY ~ Awesome Poem ~ elegantly recited. Love your poem too ~ a nie play on words. I'm having a Steak Pie Peas & Mash and a small (125cc) red wine for LUNCH ! Have to keep sober at work ~ but I'm on my BIKE ! Please check COLORS .... ~ A B & K Collaboration ~ Thanks BRIAN

          • Goldfinch60

            Enjoy your pie Brian, I am going to cook a ham and mushroom Italian dish tonight for Joyce and I.

          • Michael Edwards

            Not worried how it's taken - just pour the wine. Great write which gave me a smile - JM eat your heart out.

            • Goldfinch60

              Thanks Michael, mine's a large glass of Rioja please.

            • WL Schuett

              Love that pie lol well done

              • Goldfinch60

                Thanks WLm glad you enjoyed it.

              • orchidee

                Of course it's the pork pie meaning for me, not any swoony stuff! A fine write G. Was it she who must be obeyed?!

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank Orchi. This was all Fays fault with her poem She-Fever.

                • sue.evans

                  A light hearted read - I enjoyed reading this - thank you 😊

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you sue, most kind.

                  • myself and me

                    Pie with wine? This is a perfect combination.
                    Interesting, I would say.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thank you m and m, wine with everything is my point of view.

                      • myself and me

                        Cheers.

                      • dusk arising

                        Whichever way it reads
                        it'll satisfy your needs
                        the beauty's in its crafting
                        not in yer flipping shafting

                        I think it was brilliant.

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Thank you DA, much appreciated.



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