COLORS OF THE RAINBOW ~ Collaboration Poem ~ BRIAN & SANTITA

BRIAN & ANGELA

 

 

LADY IN RED ~ RED IS SANTITA'S FAVORITE COLOR 

 

RED is vibrant ~ it catches the Human Eye

The color of berries ~ tomatoes and Cherry Pie !

RED is such a lively hue ~ very much in Fashion

Enhances my Skin ~ when RED I'm in ~ with a glowing Passion ! 

 

ORANGE is the color ~ of my True Love's Hair

Her Bikini ~psychedelic ~ and her underwear

They say QRANGE is for caution ~ but I don't really care

ORANGE is the color ~ of my True Love's Hair

 

YELLOW the color of Bright Shining Sun

Lemons ~ Bananas ~ Pineapples with RUM

He stands out in a crowd ~ my bright handsome Fellow

Saving Maidens from the Fire ~ all dressed in YELLOW

 

ROBIN HOOD ~ all dressed in GREEN

Liveliest Man you've ever seen 

With all the GIRLS ~ He liked to carry on

That's how he scored ~ with Maid Marion !

 

BLUE is the color of my Lover's EYES

One look from them and I'm HYPNOTIZED !

His Eyes make me quiver ~ between my Thighs

BLUE is the color of my Lover's EYES !

 

INDIGO and OUT~DI~COME  such an awesome color

Deep like Rum ~ puts my True Love ~ in a blissful haze

I always wear ~ when she is there

My deep blue silk PJ's 

 

VIOLET ~ a color that's so romantic

My Purple Patch so sychophantic

Pardon my Sarong ~ but my Thong does the trick

Purple Patch my Lover loves to LICK

 

Colors intrude and define our MOOD

SO beware and take care what you wear !

 

Thanks for visiting ~ Comments welcome ~ Love B & S XOX

 

Different colors mean different thing s to different people

Johnny Cash has his reasons for always dressing in BLACK !

We enjoyed compiling (and editing !) this Collaboration Poem

and we know you will enjoy reading it ! SANTITA is responsible

for RED ~ YELLOW ~ BLUE and VIOLET !  Love to ALL B & S XOX.

 

  • Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 5th, 2017 04:02
  • Comment from author about the poem: We live in a very colorful World ~ and every time we see a RAINBOW we are reminded that there are at least seven distinct colors to choose from R O Y G B I V ~ We have hilited these in the Poem. Ladies use color (over & under !) to a much more subtle effect than Men ~ and I can often detect Angela's mood by the colors she chooses to wear. Whenever I attend a formal Dinner or Ball I do my famous impression of a PENGUIN WALK to amuse the guests (I don't tell them it's my normal walk !). While all around me the Ladies are a shimmering Rainbow of Loveliness ! When I've completed this cycle I want to be reincarnated as a Lady ~ although I love Orange & Oranges so I think in the 17th C I was NELL GWYNN ! Thanks for visiting comments welcome ~ BRIAN & SANTITA XOXOXOXOXOXOXO
  • Category: Reflection
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  • Christina8

    Another simply wonderful collaboration, Brian and Santita! I like the passion that you infused into the colors! Very well done, indeed! Hugs to both! Christina

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      Thanks CHRIS for your very loving comment ! It is a lovely collaboration I allocated the colors and we worked independently (we're 4300 miles apart !) and shared and edited ! The result does have frisson ! Pleased you liked it Rainbow Hugs ~ back to you ~ BRIAN & SANTITA @@@@@@@@@

    • Fay Slimm.

      What a vivid and colourfully scribed tribute to rainbows - well done you two collaborates.

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Thanks FAY ~ it is a true collaboration of Poetic Minds because the completed Poem is much greater than the sum of the ODD ODES ~ Poetic Love ~ BRIAN & SANTITA XOX

      • orchidee

        A fine write together there! I will never get past purple/violet - too swoony! heehee. Oh it's too much for me, my sheltered life, etc, etc!

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          Thank STEVE ~ we did warn you with an 18 ! Also in our Senses of Love Poem we did say Love encapsulates (good word !) ALL the senses ! Thanks for you comment ~ yous BRIAN & SANTITA

        • WL Schuett

          Nice work love the concept , good job getting it to work

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            Thanks FRIEND ~ It does take time and mutual understanding ~ BUT ~ we think the symbiosis of the finished Poem is worth it ! Pleased you liked it ~ Yours BRIAN & SANTITA

          • orchidee

            And - thanks goodness no pic of Kate Price - utterly hideous, always in the papers, makes me feel sick. If Santita don't know her - don't bother. Not missed anything at all!

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              Thanks STEVE ~ You should know by now that i select my LADIES ~ very very carefully ~ it is their charm I look for and NOT their PRICE ! When they read the POEM they all agreed to feature ! Yours B & S

              • orchidee

                I'm gonna do some rant-poem on Price, if I see her pic once more. That'll probably be tomorrow then! doh!

              • Goldfinch60

                Good colourful write.

                • BRIAN & ANGELA

                  Thanks ANDY ~ Color and lovely Ladie always stirs my MUSE ! Thanks for your seasoned comment ~ Your Friends ~ BRIAN & SANTITA

                • orchidee

                  I love it really, lots of swooning! I'm a dark horse. heehee. Just don't post a pic of Kate Price, or we'll all vanish!

                  • BRIAN & ANGELA

                    Life in the OLD HORSE yet then STEVE. In my book too KP ist verboten ~ OK Yours B & S

                    • orchidee

                      Oh lol. She\'s horrible. Her botox stuff will all collapse one day. There\'s other things too. It\'s all SELF, SELF, SELF for her!

                    • lasergraph

                      What a fun look at color. I am smiling.

                    • Michael Edwards

                      Great collaboration but where is the 'u' in colour? I recognise all the work that went into this - great outcome.

                      • BRIAN & ANGELA

                        Thanks MICHAEL ~ YES it is time consuming but we both think (and others judging by the Comments) the END PRODUCT more than justified the MEANS ! In my response to SANTITA I added the following comment on COLOR ! "I used the American spelling of COLOR ~ more symmetrical ~ and a tribute to Webster's Dictionary and the lovely SANTITA !" Also she used COLOR in Stanzas (verses) 1 3 5 7 and I have learned (the hard way !) to never argue with a LADY and SANTITA is a LADY ! Thanks for your comment ! Yours as ever BRIAN & SANTITA

                      • FredPeyer

                        Santita, no wonder you love the color red, you look gorgeous in that picture!!!
                        And Brian, don't know how you look like, but tried to imagine you doing the penguin walk! Come to think of it, thank you for NOT putting up a picture of that!
                        Beautiful writing, beautiful collaboration! But instead of an 18+ I think it should have been a 24+!
                        Really, REALLY enjoyed it!

                      • sue.evans

                        A fun read😊

                        • BRIAN & ANGELA

                          Thanks SUE ~ Pleased you liked it ~ We classified it as 18 because there are Young Teens on this site ~ and Adults with sensitive minds ~ Yours BRIAN & SANTITA

                        • WriteBeLight

                          Very creative and entertaining. Lovely work you two!

                          • BRIAN & ANGELA

                            Thanks HONEY ~ w always do our best to both post a quality POEM and also to entertain ! Love ~ BRIAN & SANTITA XOX

                          • myself and me

                            So, what color are you in today.
                            Thank you for presenting such a colorful poem in such a eye catching way.

                            • BRIAN & ANGELA

                              I was in formal meetings today so it was Grey Trousers ~ Blue Shirt and Tie and a Navy Blue Blazer ~ Cool & Neutral ! SANTITA is still in Red ~ awesome ! Pleased you enjoyed the poem we like to entertain ~ individually & collaboratively ! Yours B & S Thanks for your Poem on our FUSION ~ we now have 10 ~ so room for one more drink ! B & S

                              • myself and me

                                Cool.



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