Misty enveloping music
Hanging dreamily in the air
Soft candle light infusing
The essence of her hair
Elegant long fingers bedecked
With diamonds and gold
Red ruby lips, a hint of perfume
She truly is a sight to behold
Eyes glittering below lashes from the gods
She smiles and whispers huskily ‘come to me’
Slowly pulling golden satin sheets open wide
Playfully revealing her nakedness for you to see
Your heart explodes, you forget to breathe
Desperately want to move with limbs like lead
Alabaster skin, a hint of unspeakable pleasure
It is all yours to love and hold, waiting on the bed
But you are paralyzed, motionless stuck in place
Her nakedness beckons, you cannot look away
She is beauty personified, bred to be gazed upon
A heavenly promise of lust, love, tenderness, and play
Your fingers are clammy, your forehead full of sweat
The air is heavy, breathing becomes a chore
With a jolt you sit up, a wild look in your eyes
It was just a dream, a fata morgana, and nothing more
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Author:
Alfred Peyer (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 7th, 2017 00:09
- Category: Erotic
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Comments10
Erotica - oh for youth again but love mellows and I wouldn't change it. Sheer delight Fred and coincidentally I've written a few one liners on dreams - not typed up and if I can find them I'll post them tomorrow.
Mahalo Michael. You know, just because we are older, doesn't mean we can have erotic dreams! Antonio made that clear to me!
Excellent alluring steamy. Beautiful flow beautiful story. Most excellent writing.
Mugsdaddy, thanks so much! Appreciate your kind words!
Good sensuous write, pity it was a dream though.
You can say that again, Goldfinch, but at my age sometimes I think dreams are all I have left! 🙂
Thank you for your kind comment!
Hubba hubba - I think that's the phrase?
If this is what you want to say: 'hubba hubba - used to express approval, excitement, or enthusiasm, especially with regard to a person's appearance'
then yes, by any means! Any compliment is graciously accepted! Mahalo, Frank!
No no no no you had me going there, i was seeing images, i broke out in a thirst..... i was gonna send out for popcorn..... a dream.... a flippin dream...... nah .... it was real i tell ya... i know it was.... i could see it.
d a, maybe you can see it, but you have to feeeeel it!
Thank you for an incredibly heart felt and funny comment!
Did you have to wash the sheets? A hot one here, Fred! Enjoyed being a voyeur.
Yep, but only full of sweat! Any other thought would indicate a dirty mind!
Of course, I was asking about sweating. Only a dirty mind would assume anything else!
Nice playful poem bet it was fun to write
Thanks, it was a lot of work. Just couldn't get it to sound as steamy, yet tender, as I wanted. One day, maybe.
I thought you did real good
Holly spinach dip.
Did you forget to turn the air conditioner on? What make you so hot? How are you going to spend your day with a dream like this?
Oh, what a dream.
Thanks m&m, could have used that spinach dip to cool down!
Here are the chips for the dip.
Excellent poem! So sensuous and descriptive. Only to be teased that it was a dream. Great job!
Mahalo Christina, life just isn't fair, isn't it?
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