The Road lamp is on
Pull my shadow thin and long
With wind greeting me good night
Moon peeps through curtain
Keep my soul wake for certain
Wet pillow for no reason
revised
The Road lamp is on
Pull my shadow thin and long
rain mixed with tear rolling down
Moon peeps through curtain
Keep my soul wake for certain
Wet pillow for no reason
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Author:
myself and me (
Offline) - Published: September 7th, 2017 09:16
- Comment from author about the poem: Santita encourage me to try a sedoka. Here it is.
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Comments8
Lovely , Lonely and sad ... but, lovely
You got it. Thanks.
Doh! What do I know about poetic styles?! I thought it was a lot of people writing about a car recently - a Skoda?! heehee. A fine write M.
I do not think this car could run far. Thank you O.
What a great job you made of this - top notch m&m
Thank you M.E.. Your comment make me fly.
Thanks M & M ~ there is a lot of OVERT pathos in this excellent SEDOKA ~ but the reasons are COVERT ~ Thanks BRIAN
You are right. Thank you for reading and commenting.
M&m, you just moved into the top echelon of writers here. Or maybe you were already there, just hiding!
I totally lost myself and me in your comment, do not know who I am now. Thank you.
Super write m and m.
Thanks. G.
Beautiful, no need to say more.
Thanks will be my short reply.
Good
Very lovely . I’ve not heard of a Sedoka before
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