He opened the door and entered her dreams.
In dreams we sleep; in sleep we dream.
She saw the way in dreams; in life she took the road.
Forgotten dreams return in sleep, remembered dreams are scorned.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A bit of a filler today - had these kicking around and was prompted to post them following some comments yesterday.
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Like it or not, I have to agree with Santita! #1 is my favorite also. But they are all good!
Have to admit it No1 is my favourite too.
For me number one has the drama and is a story waiting to be told.
Ah the story - a sense of intrigue - thinking cap on.
A fine write and bit swoony pic M.
Oh swoon away swoon ....!
Excellent starters Michael. Now to just flesh them out ,,,
You want a main course? Or go straight to the sweet?
LOL. Only you can play chef.
The first one liner did it for me too Michael - and that line drawing of a nude is sensational too.
thanks so much Fay - mounting an exhibition later today and will have some of these line drawings on display. Mostly they are float mounted in black or white frames.
Good one loners Michael.
Not sure if that was intended but they certainly are loners Andy - thanks for the comment.
Oop, Don't know my i's from my o's - Fork 'andles comes to mind.
Thanks MICHAEL ~ We live to dream & dream to live ! Love No. 3 we can follow our dreams ~ BUT ~ I prefer tofollow the Yellow Brick Road ~ It got me to LEGO LAND (Denmark) and OZ (Sydney). Love the SILLYWET ~ so few lines ~ so many memories ! Have a Nice Day ! BRIAN ~ Birthday Boy !
Well said Brian - you have a nice day too.
I really enjoyed all your one liners! Great job on these!
Thanks Christina - they're such fun. Also they can come to mind at any time - the trick is in either remembering them or (if you have a memory like mine) finding pencil and paper pretty darn quick.
Nice #3 for me
No3 the winner
Dreams of an artist are full of imagination and deep thoughts.
Simple and great one liners.
You are too kid - thanks so much m&m
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