Was it the VISION of Her that stirred

My HEART and made me desire ~ to Touch to

Scent to Savour ~ The  sweet essence of Her Lips

Her Bosom and Her Petals ~ All of Her !  


Sight not enough to sate latent desire

Only satisfied could be with all My

Senses joined as one ~ Sight ~ Scent ~ Savour

Only then could I know ~ how sure My HEART !


My Heart outscored My Head ~ and with scant thought

A bold qustion !  "Would you care to Dance ?"

{Her closeness and Her fragrance stirred my Loins !}

Yes Yes Yes !  It was an Intimate Waltz !


Our Bodies responded sensuously

Strangers in the Night ~ exchanging KISSES !


Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love BRIAN XOX


This Poem is presented as a Blank Verse 4 4 4 2 Sonnet in Iambic

Pentameter ~ OK  If it doesn't Rhyme ~ then it must have Rhythm !

The Rhythm of Love ~ always has a very Powerful Beat ~ XOXOX


This POEM is dedicated to ALL our Beautiful MPS Ladies

And ~ YES YES YES ~ they are ALL BEAUTIFUL ~ AMEN ! 

  • Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 9th, 2017 02:45
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is another POEM in our "Love at First Sight" series of Poems. Does it happen ? YES YES YES ! It happened to Me and many of our Members ~ It could happen to you TONIGHT ~ Love to All ~ BRIAN XOXOX
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 40
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  • Mugsdaddy

    Fine form but perfect sentiment.


      Thanks for your comment MD ~ Structure & Sentiment fit together ~ Hand in Glove ~ Yours BRIAN

    • Wallace

      A fine description of human love.
      Casanova could not have described it better.

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Thanks WALLACE ~ Pleased you enjoyed it ! To be compared to the Late Great Casanova is praise indeed ~ BRIAN

      • Michael Edwards

        Brings out the sentimentalist in me - fine words Brian

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          Well MICHAEL ~ I sensed a Romantic Haywain ambling though MPS ~ so I hopped abourd and let the Muse move me ! BRIAN The Sentimental !

        • orchidee

          Ohhh I dunno if it rhymed, had metre, or was an iambic wotsit, or whatever - due to the fact that I swooned! heehee.

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            Ohhhh STEVE ~ Your comment are so so droll. At your AGE a glimpse of the Barmaid's ample thighs ~ as she reaches up for the Sherry bottle ~ You know the one I mean ~ kick starts your Libido and we have to administer OXYGEN ~ Once a GIGOLO always a GIGOLO ~ Your Friend in need ~ BRIAN !

          • orchidee

            But I pays you back for making me swoon. I sings: 'Oh, some enchanted evening...' Wish I would put that sherry down!

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              "You may see a Stranger across a Crowded Room ......................... ! Oh YES YES YES i REMEMBER IT WELL ! BRIAN The Impulsive !

            • Goldfinch60

              Good loving write Brian. Was the ardour fulfilled?

              • BRIAN & ANGELA

                YES indeed ANDY to the hilt ~ Well it was my BIRTHDAY and we are in Wonderland ~ where all your Fantasies become Realities ~ BRIAN The Danceman

              • myself and me

                A love letter in pink.
                Beautifully done.

                • BRIAN & ANGELA

                  Thanks M & M ~ It is a Love Sonnet to a Lady ~ So I thought PINK was more appropriate than BLUE Please you liked it ~ Yours BRIAN

                • Christina8

                  A beautiful dedication to your beautiful Angela and all the MPS ladies! A wonderful description of falling in love. I can't say enough about this poem! Bravo! Hugs-Christina

                  • BRIAN & ANGELA

                    Thanks CHRISTINA ~ You are so so lovely ! I knew you would love this because your Lovely Love Poems tell me that You too are a Romantic ! Poetry is the true Food of Love ~ which is why we write Love Poems ! Please check my ROSES and also the New Fusion on "Where on EARTH you would like to LIVE !" Cuddles because you are so so Cuddly ~ BRIAN ~ The Romantic !

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