ANGELA ~ RESPELENDENT & LOVELY ~ IN HER EVENING GOWN !
Was it the VISION of Her that stirred
My HEART and made me desire ~ to Touch to
Scent to Savour ~ The sweet essence of Her Lips
Her Bosom and Her Petals ~ All of Her !
Sight not enough to sate latent desire
Only satisfied could be with all My
Senses joined as one ~ Sight ~ Scent ~ Savour
Only then could I know ~ how sure My HEART !
My Heart outscored My Head ~ and with scant thought
A bold qustion ! "Would you care to Dance ?"
{Her closeness and Her fragrance stirred my Loins !}
Yes Yes Yes ! It was an Intimate Waltz !
Our Bodies responded sensuously
Strangers in the Night ~ exchanging KISSES !
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love BRIAN XOX
This Poem is presented as a Blank Verse 4 4 4 2 Sonnet in Iambic
Pentameter ~ OK If it doesn't Rhyme ~ then it must have Rhythm !
The Rhythm of Love ~ always has a very Powerful Beat ~ XOXOX
This POEM is dedicated to ALL our Beautiful MPS Ladies
And ~ YES YES YES ~ they are ALL BEAUTIFUL ~ AMEN !
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 9th, 2017 02:45
- Comment from author about the poem: This is another POEM in our "Love at First Sight" series of Poems. Does it happen ? YES YES YES ! It happened to Me and many of our Members ~ It could happen to you TONIGHT ~ Love to All ~ BRIAN XOXOX
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Comments8
Fine form but perfect sentiment.
Thanks for your comment MD ~ Structure & Sentiment fit together ~ Hand in Glove ~ Yours BRIAN
A fine description of human love.
Casanova could not have described it better.
Thanks WALLACE ~ Pleased you enjoyed it ! To be compared to the Late Great Casanova is praise indeed ~ BRIAN
Brings out the sentimentalist in me - fine words Brian
Well MICHAEL ~ I sensed a Romantic Haywain ambling though MPS ~ so I hopped abourd and let the Muse move me ! BRIAN The Sentimental !
Ohhh I dunno if it rhymed, had metre, or was an iambic wotsit, or whatever - due to the fact that I swooned! heehee.
Ohhhh STEVE ~ Your comment are so so droll. At your AGE a glimpse of the Barmaid's ample thighs ~ as she reaches up for the Sherry bottle ~ You know the one I mean ~ kick starts your Libido and we have to administer OXYGEN ~ Once a GIGOLO always a GIGOLO ~ Your Friend in need ~ BRIAN !
But I pays you back for making me swoon. I sings: 'Oh, some enchanted evening...' Wish I would put that sherry down!
"You may see a Stranger across a Crowded Room ......................... ! Oh YES YES YES i REMEMBER IT WELL ! BRIAN The Impulsive !
Good loving write Brian. Was the ardour fulfilled?
YES indeed ANDY to the hilt ~ Well it was my BIRTHDAY and we are in Wonderland ~ where all your Fantasies become Realities ~ BRIAN The Danceman
A love letter in pink.
Beautifully done.
Thanks M & M ~ It is a Love Sonnet to a Lady ~ So I thought PINK was more appropriate than BLUE Please you liked it ~ Yours BRIAN
A beautiful dedication to your beautiful Angela and all the MPS ladies! A wonderful description of falling in love. I can't say enough about this poem! Bravo! Hugs-Christina
Thanks CHRISTINA ~ You are so so lovely ! I knew you would love this because your Lovely Love Poems tell me that You too are a Romantic ! Poetry is the true Food of Love ~ which is why we write Love Poems ! Please check my ROSES and also the New Fusion on "Where on EARTH you would like to LIVE !" Cuddles because you are so so Cuddly ~ BRIAN ~ The Romantic !
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