Myself and me
One in my heart
One in my mind
Most of the time
They get along
And really cool
My mind is logical
My heart is gentle
I feel so peaceful
Without either
Myself or me
I won't be a
Being
Occasionally
They fall into fight
And became terribly hot
My mind was annoying
My heart was breaking
I had to do the fixing
Only with both
Myself and me
I could become a
Being
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Nice poem please keep sharing!
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-Thanks M & M ~ Interesting take on the inner conflict we all have between our emotional thought (HEART) and rational thought (HEAD) ! Being a Scientist (and a Virgo) I tend to be rational and in any situation look for concrete proof. However sometimes (as my poems will testify) I some times throw caution to the winds and Leap before Look ! My current GF Angela (who is very perceptive) tells me I am 75% MIND and only 25% HEART whereas she being 50% SPANISH is the converse 25% MIND & 75% HEART ! Because f this we are very very compatible ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN The Cautious !
When there is conflict between my mind and heart, it is such a torment. Thank you for sharing your thought with me.
A fine poem (by the two of you??!). Did M or M write this one? lol.
Actually, by three. I started the first stanza, me wrote the second and myself wrote the last.
Oh that's good. heehee.
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Good write, we are all several people within our minds and we show different ones depending on what we are doing.
Yes. you are right. Thank you G.
What a blank that is my friend!
Sometimes the most enlightening thoughts come from nothing at all.
Your comment makes my day. Thank you.
As did your words reflect my emotional state today!
I enjoyed this in my own struggles I try to let my heart win ... can't always do what's correct when I can do what's right
We are too weak to let our heart win. We did the correct thing to hurt ourselves.
Our hardest battles are most often internal. I love the write.
The internal battle, no winner, no ends. Thank you for reading.
Interesting poem. The struggle we face between heart and mind can be difficult. But necessary if we are to grow.
The struggle is killing me. Never know grow take such a lot of pain. Thank you.
Myself and me by Myself and me! Now who is talking? Somehow I picture the two of you as twins, or maybe one of you standing in front of a mirror, yelling, screaming, or smiling at the other one.
If your 'fillers' are that good, can't wait to see the non-fillers!
I am talking, the two are fighting. I am so tired, reading your comment just make me relaxed. Thank you.
You're welcome, anytime! Glad you're relaxed now. Just keep on holding that pendulum in front of your face (either one), keep cooing the mantra, and ALL WILL BE WELL!
I so enjoyed reading this.
I am so glad you enjoy the piece. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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