ALLEGATIONS
He
Was
Very
Upset
Mostly
Because
Everyone
Tolerated
Horrendous
Allegations
DO YOU EVER
Do
you
ever
think
dreams
effects
avowedly
intensify
individual
experiences
?
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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Clever constructs these, Michael! I do appreciate well shaped poems.
I agree about the construct but I do wonder if the need to stick to form detracts from poetic imagery - more concerned with getting words to fit than with seeking poetic flow - if you know what I mean. Mind you they are certainly not easy.
I'm sure they are not easy. To me they represent challenging poetic exercises, as opposed to poetic expressions. Nothing wrong with accepting a challenge! It's fulfilling when it works out.
Like both of them. I also sleep very heavily, nothing can wake me. You could probably steal my wife from right beside me! But I usually do remember the last dream, or at least part of it, right after waking up. But not for very long.
Thanks Fred
No 1 is stronger for me, Michael. Enjoyed reading them both.
Thanks for your comment Frank
Interesting form for pithy reflections. They evoke reflection and pause. Nicely done!
Thank you for your kind comment
Two very clever Edones Michael. I too like the second one. Dreams are there to inspire us, if we ever reach our dreams for what do we then aspire.
Thanks Andy - I guess they are useful if you can remember them.
I be one that gives praise because noticing poeticism excellence - right here! Note this edone? 1,2,3, letters, up to 10 (excellence). Mind you, I not be speaking proper in making this comment!
I speak not in makin answer to yer post in - cheers O
These are both excellent but have you ever considered doing one in reverse form? Just a suggestion.
Mugsdaddy
Thanks mugsdaddy - have thought about the reverse form but I'm a bit of a coward and haven't tried it yet - BUT your prompt has worked - will give it a go sometime.
Thanks MICHEAL ~ Allegations and Dreams ~ the former best ignored ~ the latter best remembered ~ because "once in a while along the way ~ they can come true ! Yours BRIAN. Please check the new S & B Collaboration on "Seasons of Love" ~ Thanks S & B
Thanks and will look in latest S & B collab.
I know Edone better now. I thought it should start with one letter word, in this case, there is not much to start with. Start with two-letter word, open it up to more possibilities. Enjoy both.
There's no rule that you have to start with a single letter word - one day I might start one with a seven letter word or there again....!
Cooee, did you swoon at my 'comment edone'? I did - swooned at my own brilliance! Oh vanity - I must eat humble pie now! heehee.
With cream? Or are you a custard baby = err laced with sherry that is.
Erm, never quite known the ingredients for humble pie? How does one make it?!
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Again amazing , nice line drawing Michael
Thanks so much Bill
Wonderful stuff. Great ideas expressed in a rigid format. Very difficult. Too challenging for me, I have enough trouble with meter and rhymes. On the second Edone (my favorite) I believe un-remembered dreams soon become
De-ja vu. Your artwork is, as always, outstanding. - Phil
Hey Michael, I'm happy to be back here and read your poetry again. Nice form. I'm studying a bit but forms still too complicated for me. Answer for your question' I have very lite sleep and have mostly little dreams that I can remember instantly. Some dreams can affect my next day with happiness, excitement or sadness. Negativity.
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