A Love So True

Christina8

He approached me with caution

"Would you like to dance with me?"

I teased him for a moment but

with his sparkling eyes I said, "absolutely"!

 

A slow song filled the night club

We danced closely to "Tell Me It's Real"

His aroma penetrated my heat

My sex matched his in this dance surreal

 

I could feel his Girbaud jeans stretched

to capacity as his excitedness grew

As he pulled me tight and tighter still

In the silence of songs end I knew,

 

That my heart was melting like butter

but my body ached for him too

I knew we'd have one of those unforgettable nights

but I never thought we'd end up with a love so true.

  • Author: Christina (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 15th, 2017 06:56
  • Comment from author about the poem: The song KC and Jo-Jo "All my life" ended up being our wedding song. Well, one of two.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 38
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  • myself and me

    So romantic. Dance in love, dance for love, dance to love.
    Such a beautiful piece.

    • Christina8

      Thanks so much m&m! I appreciate the kind words!

    • Seek

      Romance will never lose its charm. So well written.

      • Christina8

        Thank you so much, Seek! Your kind words are appreciated.

      • orchidee

        Swoon! heehee.

        • Christina8

          Thanks for reading orchidee!

        • Goldfinch60

          Good write, may you dance together for eternity.

          • Christina8

            I sure hope so GF! Thanks for the positive feedback!

          • malubotelho

            A sexy little piece and also full of feelings. Nice writing. Enjoyed reading.

            • Christina8

              Thanks malu! I really appreciate your kind words!

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              WOW CHRIS ~ You sure caught the HEATWAVE flowing through MPS ~ reading your sensuously elegant poem ~ full of rhyme and teasin' and rhythm too ! You are so so fortunate the temperature has stayed high ! V1. A gentlemanly approach always gets the GIRL V2, & 3. Aroused LIBIDOS V4. Strangers in the Night ............. ! Love it Chris when you let your Hair ( and everything else) down. It prepared me for Angela tonight ! Mega Cuddles & Hugs ~ BRIAN

              • Christina8

                Well, I'm glad I could help! LOL Thanks for such high marks on my poem. I appreciate your feedback so much! Mega Hugs back--Christina

              • lasergraph

                Sensual and romantic woven together. Great write.

                • Christina8

                  Thanks laser! I appreciate your wonderful words!

                • Tony36

                  Well written and expressed

                  • Christina8

                    Thank you Tony!

                  • WL Schuett

                    Very nice for you to share such a personal experience, a very moving write ... well done

                    • Christina8

                      Thank you WL! I appreciate your wonderful feedback, I appreciate it!

                    • Michael Edwards

                      Uplifting so to speak and an enjoyable read

                      • Christina8

                        Thanks so much for the kind words. They are appreciated!!

                      • Simple-Man87

                        Beautiful... I loved it.

                        • Christina8

                          I appreciate your wonderful feedback! It is appreciated!



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