He approached me with caution
"Would you like to dance with me?"
I teased him for a moment but
with his sparkling eyes I said, "absolutely"!
A slow song filled the night club
We danced closely to "Tell Me It's Real"
His aroma penetrated my heat
My sex matched his in this dance surreal
I could feel his Girbaud jeans stretched
to capacity as his excitedness grew
As he pulled me tight and tighter still
In the silence of songs end I knew,
That my heart was melting like butter
but my body ached for him too
I knew we'd have one of those unforgettable nights
but I never thought we'd end up with a love so true.
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 15th, 2017 06:56
- Comment from author about the poem: The song KC and Jo-Jo "All my life" ended up being our wedding song. Well, one of two.
- Category: Love
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Comments11
So romantic. Dance in love, dance for love, dance to love.
Such a beautiful piece.
Thanks so much m&m! I appreciate the kind words!
Romance will never lose its charm. So well written.
Thank you so much, Seek! Your kind words are appreciated.
Swoon! heehee.
Thanks for reading orchidee!
Good write, may you dance together for eternity.
I sure hope so GF! Thanks for the positive feedback!
A sexy little piece and also full of feelings. Nice writing. Enjoyed reading.
Thanks malu! I really appreciate your kind words!
WOW CHRIS ~ You sure caught the HEATWAVE flowing through MPS ~ reading your sensuously elegant poem ~ full of rhyme and teasin' and rhythm too ! You are so so fortunate the temperature has stayed high ! V1. A gentlemanly approach always gets the GIRL V2, & 3. Aroused LIBIDOS V4. Strangers in the Night ............. ! Love it Chris when you let your Hair ( and everything else) down. It prepared me for Angela tonight ! Mega Cuddles & Hugs ~ BRIAN
Well, I'm glad I could help! LOL Thanks for such high marks on my poem. I appreciate your feedback so much! Mega Hugs back--Christina
Sensual and romantic woven together. Great write.
Thanks laser! I appreciate your wonderful words!
Well written and expressed
Thank you Tony!
Very nice for you to share such a personal experience, a very moving write ... well done
Thank you WL! I appreciate your wonderful feedback, I appreciate it!
Uplifting so to speak and an enjoyable read
Thanks so much for the kind words. They are appreciated!!
Beautiful... I loved it.
I appreciate your wonderful feedback! It is appreciated!
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