LOVE IS ~ Having a Shower ~ BEFORE you make LOVE
Playing your favorite LOVE SONG in the Bedroom
Telling she scents and savors like Paradise
Making sure she is as ready for COITUS as you are (ever ready !)
LOVE IS ~ When you surprise her with flowers ~ for LOVE
Telling Her (often) how Beautiful she is
Kissing her softly ~ EVERYWHERE !
Pleasuring her in all the RIGHT places
LOVE IS ~ Booking a Table @ her favorite Restaurant (NOT KFC !)
Booking a surprise trip to PARIS for your Anniversary
Having a SHOWER ~ AFTER making LOVE ~ Heaven !
Letting her have the LAST WORD in a TIFF
LOVE IS ~ The intimate understanding between TWO PEOPLE IN LOVE
LOVE IS ~ The Sensuous Desire to explore each other BODY MIND & SOUL
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love CHRISTINA & BRIAN XOX
This Poem is presented as a 4 4 4 2 Free Verse Sonnet ~ OK
The cartoons by KIM will change through the day so please
vit more than once ~ Thanks CHRISTINA & BRIAN XOXOX
- Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: September 18th, 2017 01:38
- Category: Love
- Views: 42
Comments9
Knew I would swoon! heehee. Good write.
Thanks STEVE ~ Hope you did\'t have to think back to BC ! Pleased you caught the sentiments in the COLLABORATION ! Please add a POEM to the FUSION ~ Clothing ~ You could tell us about WOAD ! Yours CHRISTINA & BRIAN.
Love is the absolute combing of souls travelling towards eternity.
Good write both of you.
Thanks ANDY for an excellent reply ~ to which both of us can relate ~ Yours CHRISTINA & BRIAN
Another spiffingly good collab - well done both.
YES INDEED MICHAEL ~ We do bounce on and off each other (not literally !) CHRIS likes to love and be loved TOTALLY ~ Et Moi ? ABSOLUTEMENTE ! Yours CHRISTINA & BRIAN
Your collab struck all the right notes for me on the wonderful subject of love - well done you two.
Thanks FAY for a lovely comment from somebody with great poetic discernment ! We wrote our verses separately and it needed very little editing ! We enjoyed it and that is the important factor in a collab Poem. Love CHRISTINA & BRIAN XOXOX
It was a pleasure to collaborate with you! It's neat seeing how it all came together. Will be watching for the cartoon changes-Hugs-Christina
THANKS PARTNER ~ Pleased you liked the Polished Product ~ I love it too. I felt the first "KIM" I posted was appropriate for US ! Lovers of Poetry and Love in the Spirit ~ of course ! Now you have seen KIM 1. i will change it for KIM 2. Love is ... Hugs for You ! BRIAN The Huggable !
Lovely love collaboration between you two. Great you are
Thanks Sister MALU ~ Yes we are in Poetic Love ~ which is why it works so well. Thanks for your loving comment ! Love & Hugs from Sister CHRISTINA Brother BRIAN XOXOX
Thanks Brian๐
Two showers in only four stanzas! Am all for it, as long as the showers are taken together! ๐
Fun piece, great writing!
And as far as having the last word is concerned Brian, you can tell her: OK, have the last word...excuse yourself!
Thanks FRED ~ showering with the LADY I LOVE is one of life's greatest pleasures ~ soap is a great lubricant. My treatment of Ladies is always Velvet Glove ~ the more gentle & patient I am the further I always get ! Yours CHRISTINA & BRIAN
A love pair write a love poem in a love mood.
Thanks M & M ~ Well that is the TITLE ~ LOVE IS ! Pleased you liked it and caught the MOOD ~ Yours CHRISTINA & BRIAN
HI CHRISTINA ~ Thanks for your love and contribution to this FUSION ~ Pleased you like the "Final Edition" we do make a good Poetic Team and we must do it again sometime ! All we need is a TITLE (Theme) and a STRUCTURE ~ let me know if your MUSE moves ! Brotherly HUGS ~ BRIAN Your Poetic Soul Mate ~ @@@@@@@@@@
Still struggling on a poem for tomorrow right now but yes we did good! Will let you know when the muse moves. Sisterly hugs!-Christina
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