Throat Cutting.

Goldfinch60

I placed the razor

To the edge of my throat

And slid it gently to the other side,

No feeling was felt.

So I slid it again,

Only harder,

And still all my skin was whole.

Why do they say

It is so easy to cut your throat,

With a razor,

When I struggled.

 

Perhaps the electric razor,

Needs sharpening.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 20th, 2017 01:39
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 57
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  • orchidee

    Doh! heehee. I thought this might be 18+. Now I've told off some people for being naughty, and not putting 18+ when it's been needed, e.g. far too swoony poems from some folk! Good write Gold. A sharp write, though not in the razor sense.

    • Goldfinch60

      No not 18+ more like 3-.

    • FredPeyer

      Goldfinch, this is soooo good! Reminds me of the terrorist who burned his lips on the exhaust pipe, trying to blow up a bus!

      • Goldfinch60

        Thanks Fred, humour is good for us all.

      • Michael Edwards

        Oh you're an amusing blade young Andy - gave me a smile.

        • Goldfinch60

          I do appreciate the 'young' Michael, thank you.

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          THANKS ANDY ~ SUICIDE IS NEVER REALLY FUNNY ~ However for many it i just a "cri de coeur" A Friend of mine tried to commit by eating 10 packs of TREBOR strong mints ~ funny thing was he nearly died. Another died (accidently) when his electric shaver (plugged in) fell in the bath ~ so you were closer than you thought to "felo de se" Thanks for a LAFF we don't get many on a WEDNESDAY MORNING ! BRAIN

          • Goldfinch60

            A laugh is good for us all. Thank you Brian.

          • malubotelho

            That is funny Gold. You are being so childish. Be careful, don't go too deep. Lol 😂

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Mal, childish can be fun.

              • malubotelho

                Yes, I agree with you.

              • Christina8

                Well, despite what some have said, I thought it was funny! You wrote a good poem here! LOL Christina

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Christina, most kind.

                • WL Schuett

                  Lol you had me worried then a good laugh

                  • Goldfinch60

                    If I can make people smile or laugh each day my day has been succcessful. Thank you WL.

                  • Louis Gibbs

                    Certainly a little levity never hurts. Nice chuckle ... thanks, Goldie.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thank you Louis, much appreciated.

                    • myself and me

                      Hahaha, electric razor. You scared me at the beginning of the poem.
                      A good humor.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Humour in life is always good, thank you M and M.

                      • dusk arising

                        Ha ha ha your wit doesn't need sharpening does it!

                        • Goldfinch60

                          I have a good sharpener always to hand. Thank you DA.



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