He treats me like a beauty queen
as he caresses every curve of my body
I can feel his heart beat faster
when he gets ever so close to me
Forgetting about the days stresses
he kisses my pouty lips with need
with our favorite love song playing
this is the moment-he doesn't have to plead
We make love with naughty whispers
and silenced moans so we don't disturb others in the house
he knows my "combination" so well that
my explosion comes so quickly but then I wait for my spouse
In a few moments after I work my magic
we lie together, spent, but happy
It's midnight already, just hours left till work
But he wanted to take the time to satisfy me
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 21st, 2017 06:46
- Comment from author about the poem: Well, we satisfy each other. I'm really going out on a limb with this one. Be gentle! It's such a stark contrast from previous writes but I thought I'd try something new.
- Category: Erotic
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Comments8
Yes, I shall be gentle. Afraid I can't comment though, as I've swooned. It's me sheltered life! heehee. Might write one on this theme meself, but I could swoon before I finish it! lol.
Thank you for your adorable reply! LOL
Ah ecstasy - it's hard to appreciate that our unique experiences are not so unique after all but shared by so many other couples. Just great Christina and may the candle burn forever.
Thanks for the wonderful words of encouragement--I was shy to post, but I do think a lot of couples share this experience too. Thanks so much!
Very good passionate write, may your loving be forever wonderfully satisfying.
Thanks very much GF for your positive wishes and comment. Very appreciated!
You wrote beautifully, you're a lucky gal. always hold it dear
I will WL! Thank you so much for the read and such a wonderful reply!
WOW CHISTINA ~ "18" and EROTIC I warned you GOATS CHEESE was an APHRODISIAC (Well should know what Ram's are FAMOUS for !) If I was close to you (3,800 miles ?) I would put you over my knee and SPANK YOU ~ for being NAUGHTY but NICE ~ but of course you would enjoy that ! I'll share your BEAUTIFUL POEM with Angela tomorrow night and hold you responsible for the outcum ! Thanks for caring & sharing and please please please let your hair down again asap ! BROTHERLY Hugs & Kisses ~ BRIAN XOXOX
Wow! What got into you?! Thanks for a spirited reply! I hope Angela likes my poem and that it spurs things on between the two of you! I was so shy to post it! I want to find a middle ground where it can be sexy but not explicit. Thanks again for your glowing review of my poetry! Sisterly hugs-Christina
Making love is no surprise but always good to read about. A soft erotic scene between hub an wife. God bless your love life. Intimacy keeps the romance burning hot.
I'm about to post something I wrote some time ago. Something about sex. I might publishe it tomorrow.
Well, I'll be the first to read it if I can! I was shy to post but am glad you enjoyed the post. I really appreciate your kind review!
Welcome Christina
Christina, you wrote a beautifully erotic, yet tender and loving poem. Making love to a wife or husband is a beautiful part of marriage, but since it is also very private, I understand why you were shy to post. But I am glad you did! I had the same problem when I posted my poem 'Slave'. Am not used to write erotica, but wanted to try anyway. Have a look at it and let me know what you think. You might also have to read Santita's poem it refers to in order to understand why I wrote it.
So yes, please keep on writing whatever comes to your mind without holding anything back. Your writing is wonderful!
Thanks Fred for such an insightful reply! I will check out your poem. Thanks so much for the compliment!
Taking time is what it's all about.
Very well done, and expressed. I've a few philosophies on making love and you touched on one. Thank you for sharing.
Well thank you! And I agree that it takes time. Thanks for your continued support and wonderful reply!
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