FIRST LOVE

Michael Edwards

 

 

FIRST LOVE

 

 

Submitting to his wisdoms calling

love with candour newly found

expressed without a manuscript

she heard his every word.

 

And though his life a wilderness

his heart in turmoil raced and gained

with all antipathy deserted

precious feelings slowly stirred.

 

His trembling hand he pressed in hers

their bodies met in nervous touch

despite as yet no skill employed

all past life sank and new began.

 

With instinct guiding first embrace

the meeting of their virgin lips

surpassing every lustful dream

that night he was a man.

 

 

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  • Goldfinch60

    Super write. Innocence lost.

    • Michael Edwards

      And maturity gained - thanks Andy

    • orchidee

      A fine write M. Oohh that's me that is - me trembling hand, in me sheltered life. Was he a mouse before, and not a man?! heehee.

      • Michael Edwards

        He was a house mouse but he was fully trained. Thanks O

      • Fay Slimm.

        Tenderest words to describe the feeling of a first love Michael - lovely read - we must think in tandem as I posted a piece of work yesterday on the same subject and with the same title. -- ha ha Great minds etc eh ?

        • Michael Edwards

          Just checked it out and realised I missed it - sorry Fay - I'll have a read now and thanks for your kind words.

        • Mugsdaddy

          Beautiful account of coming of age.
          Great write.
          Mugsdaddy

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          If you can claim
          Her current bun
          You too will
          Be a MAN my SON !

          Thanks for caring & sharing Michael lovely Poem
          and a tantilising SILLY WET !

          Please check "Say it with Flowers"
          Yours BRIAN

        • WL Schuett

          Wonderful poem of innocence in that first kiss , becoming a man ....

        • dusk arising

          Cor! So sweet and charming. Wasn't like that for me in the first love stakes. I bet most of us men were too confused with our approaching adulthood and machismo to be sweetly romantic at such tender years. That stuff arrived later for me. I enjoyed reading this beautifully written piece.

          • Michael Edwards

            Cheers dusk - my very first encounter was on a caravan park on the Isle of Wight - think I'd rather forget it.

          • malubotelho

            I love your poem Michael. Specially because it is written by a man. It is nice to see the male vision of first love. Or first sexual experience. We women, when young think that men always knows how to make love and it is not true. Men are not born with experience in sex. It must be hard in the beginning for a man to guide. Thanks for this.

            • Michael Edwards

              Thanks Malu. I must admit that my first experience was more embarrassing than tender or sensual (oh so many years ago) but that did come later - thankfully.

            • Louis Gibbs

              Beautiful expression of a male's first sexual experience, Michael ... a component of 'becoming a man', but I would question it being the definition of achieving 'manhood'. It depends on one's definition of what being a 'man' entails, as opposed to being a grown-up boy. Don't mean to nit-pic ... I love the poem!

              • Michael Edwards

                Thanks Louis. That's how he felt - whether or not he had achieved manhood was for others to judge.

                • Louis Gibbs

                  Point well taken.

                • Accidental Poet

                  As they say, the first cut is the deepest. Very well written Michael, thanks for sharing. ; )

                  • Michael Edwards

                    My pleasure - thanks for looing in and commenting.

                    • Accidental Poet

                      That pleasure was all mine. ; )

                    • Christina8

                      Excellent poem Michael! So very well written! I just love the last stanza. Tender moments of a first love--you really described it well!

                    • FredPeyer

                      Beautifully written poem, Michael. Made me remember my first time!

                      • Michael Edwards

                        It's funny how you never forget - thanks Fred.



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