Adrenaline--Part 1

Christina8

The instant I looked into his eyes

I was in for a complete surprise

My heart beat like I just ran a mile,

The adrenaline had kicked in 

But so had thoughts of sin

Oh, I melted when I saw your smile!

You reached in for a kiss

I tell you it was bliss

Nothing like ever before!

Your lips reached mine

like sweet nectar divine

I just knew that I wanted more!

I thought he might be the guy

but was this all a lie?

No, this man, he was so full of life!

and he was so gentle and kind

they are so hard to find

till I found out he had a wife!

  • Author: Christina (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 25th, 2017 06:47
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is following yesterdays poem \\\"Fall from Grace\\\". Just an imaginary tale. Thought I\\\'d try my hand at it one more time!
  • Category: Fantasy
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  • Fay Slimm.

    Oooooh - - another stunner of a last line to this poignantly written tale of a would-be romance. Great read again Chrisitina

    • Christina8

      Thank you so much Fay! My imagination just ran away, thanks for the compliment!

    • Michael Edwards

      Glad it's imaginary - great work C

      • Christina8

        Most definitely! Thanks for the compliment!

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        HI SWEETHEART ~ I adore your NAUGHTY side ~ The last line is a libido deflater ~ Most of the very fanciable Ladies I work with in "Health & Beauty" have Husbands ~ but like you I am more than satisfied with my current Partner. However we both have imaginations and sometimes they work overtime ! My fave line is "He was so gentle and kind ~ They are so hard to find" That is because like you ~ marriage has mellowed them ! You will love my poem tomorrow on DISJOINTED LOVE ! Brotherly Cuddles (an Oxymoron ?) BRIAN @@@@@@@@@@@@

        • Christina8

          Yes, you know I usually write of personal experience but I had so much fun yesterday in the fantasy department, I thought I would do it one more time! Then I'll go back to writing about my husband. 🙂 Thanks for your very thoughtful and kind response!

        • WL Schuett

          You are doing these well it seems to suit you , this was fun to read

          • Christina8

            Well, I've always written about my husband, so I thought one or two fantasy writes wouldn't hurt. Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

          • Goldfinch60

            Another super write, great twist.

            • Christina8

              Thanks so much GF! Appreciate the compliment!

            • malubotelho

              Lovely write Christina. Luckily it is just your imagination because to find attraction on another man when one is married more than fun it can be dangerous unless one can keep the safe boundary. I love your run wild imagination.

              • Christina8

                I SWEAR to you this is just my imagination at work. Even before I was married I was never with a married man. Not too much else rhymes with life. Anyway, i really do appreciate your kind comments!

                • malubotelho

                  Oh! I'm so sorry. I never mean to question you. I have many poems written by me when I was still married and some of them was sensual things written from my imagination too. We have the way with our imagination and we love to play with it. This is a beautiful thing.

                  • Christina8

                    Thanks Malu!

                  • FredPeyer

                    OK, Christina, now you did it! You ruined it with the last line! 🙂
                    You got me going, I felt good, imagined myself to be this super hero you are describing here, and then....bang! We finish with a lowlife good looking cheater!

                    • Christina8

                      I had to finish it with a zinger because I thought I was gonna be done with fantasy. Now Martina asked me if I can do a sequel. We'll see. LOL Thanks for the awesome reply!

                    • Simple-Man87

                      Oh..noooo.. That was so beautiful and romantic. Then the twist at the end. If this is true, his loss. I can't imagine someone letting go of someone who has this kind of beauty in their heart.

                      • Christina8

                        No, this is FANTASY..lol. I truly appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. I love your absolutely beautiful compliment!!!



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