Empathy

FredPeyer

Your tormented beautiful eyes

Perturb the core of my agitated soul

I yearn to caress the delicate softness

Of your disconsolate lovely face

For my heartfelt tears to mingle with yours

In a liquid manifestation

Of empathy and love

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  • Michael Edwards

    Bring on the mush - great work Fred

    • FredPeyer

      Thanks Michael, no matter what anybody says, it does feel good, doesn't it?

    • Goldfinch60

      Beautiful write Fred.

      • FredPeyer

        Thanks so much Goldfinch!!!

      • orchidee

        A lovely write Fed. How long will ya be perturbed?! lol.

        • FredPeyer

          Thanks orchidee, I am like a fish, I have a three second memory! 🙂

        • Fay Slimm.

          Tenderness perfected in this lovely tribute to empathy Fred.

          • FredPeyer

            Thank you Fay, even 'real men' CAN be tender!

          • Louis Gibbs

            Who says motorcycle riders can't be mushy too? We've got hearts inside the leather jackets!
            A sweet tribute to the magic of love, Fred.

            • FredPeyer

              Thanks so much Louis! You know we riders do have an advantage, when we cry we can always say it was the wind!

            • Pintu Mahakul

              Beautiful eyes perturb the core of my agitated soul in a liquid manifestation of empathy and love. Brilliant thought about love and empathy is excellently presented in this poem.

              • FredPeyer

                Thank you so much Pintu!

              • WL Schuett

                Beautiful poem Fred

                • FredPeyer

                  Thank you WL, coming from a writer like you, this comment means a lot to me!

                • Christina8

                  Oh, this is such a beautiful write! Great expression of your love--awesome!

                  • FredPeyer

                    Thanks so much Christina! Sometimes we guys have a hard time to express how we really feel.

                  • malubotelho

                    This is a soft love tender poem. A great man is the one that cry together with his woman. Excellent writing Fred.

                    • FredPeyer

                      Thank you Malu, thank you for your comment! At least now I know I don't have to be "macho" all the time! 🙂

                      • malubotelho

                        No macho for me. I have two sons and always told them to be human before being a man. And never macho.

                      • BRIAN & ANGELA

                        HI FRED ~ EMPATHY is SYMPATHY but with feeling and real understanding and your elegant Love Poem exemplifies that ! Thanks for caring and sharing ! When a NEW Member shares a sad Poem I always tell them that MPS is a very EMPATHETIC SITE. Do you agree ~ Yours BRIAN

                        • FredPeyer

                          Thanks so much Brian! You are right, this is an empathetic site.

                        • Poetic Dan

                          Thank you for this deep and wonderful feel to a very strong emotion of my pain and love.
                          Inspirational work my friend

                          • FredPeyer

                            Thank you so much PD. I always very much appreciate your kind comments. But please, if I write something stupid, I want to know that too!!!

                            • Poetic Dan

                              I afraid the only way I'd use that word is if you was hateful, or over ego driven. But then I would even read your writings, so unless you are really good at hiding that side there's no chance.

                            • Baylee

                              This is definitely something I have felt as well. Thank you for sharing

                              • FredPeyer

                                Thank you! If people had more empathy, this world would be a better place.

                                • Baylee

                                  This is true



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