Empathy

FredPeyer

Your tormented beautiful eyes

Perturb the core of my agitated soul

I yearn to caress the delicate softness

Of your disconsolate lovely face

For my heartfelt tears to mingle with yours

In a liquid manifestation

Of empathy and love

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  • Michael Edwards

    Bring on the mush - great work Fred

    • FredPeyer

      Thanks Michael, no matter what anybody says, it does feel good, doesn't it?

    • Goldfinch60

      Beautiful write Fred.

      • FredPeyer

        Thanks so much Goldfinch!!!

      • orchidee

        A lovely write Fed. How long will ya be perturbed?! lol.

        • FredPeyer

          Thanks orchidee, I am like a fish, I have a three second memory! 🙂

        • Accidental Poet

          Many a man has scoffed
          At the thought of being a romantic
          But love for one woman
          Will be his biggest weakness
          While also his greatest strength

          Excellent write Fred. Mushy just shows you are human. ; )

          • FredPeyer

            Thanks so much AP, you made my day! Now I can be 'mushy' any time I want! Excellent poem in your comment!

            • Accidental Poet

              Thanks Fred. Yes, anytime the urge strikes you, mush mush mush. ; )

            • Fay Slimm.

              Tenderness perfected in this lovely tribute to empathy Fred.

              • FredPeyer

                Thank you Fay, even 'real men' CAN be tender!

              • Louis Gibbs

                Who says motorcycle riders can't be mushy too? We've got hearts inside the leather jackets!
                A sweet tribute to the magic of love, Fred.

                • FredPeyer

                  Thanks so much Louis! You know we riders do have an advantage, when we cry we can always say it was the wind!

                • Pintu Mahakul

                  Beautiful eyes perturb the core of my agitated soul in a liquid manifestation of empathy and love. Brilliant thought about love and empathy is excellently presented in this poem.

                  • FredPeyer

                    Thank you so much Pintu!

                  • WL Schuett

                    Beautiful poem Fred

                    • FredPeyer

                      Thank you WL, coming from a writer like you, this comment means a lot to me!

                    • Christina8

                      Oh, this is such a beautiful write! Great expression of your love--awesome!

                      • FredPeyer

                        Thanks so much Christina! Sometimes we guys have a hard time to express how we really feel.

                      • malubotelho

                        This is a soft love tender poem. A great man is the one that cry together with his woman. Excellent writing Fred.

                        • FredPeyer

                          Thank you Malu, thank you for your comment! At least now I know I don't have to be "macho" all the time! 🙂

                          • malubotelho

                            No macho for me. I have two sons and always told them to be human before being a man. And never macho.

                          • BRIAN & ANGELA

                            HI FRED ~ EMPATHY is SYMPATHY but with feeling and real understanding and your elegant Love Poem exemplifies that ! Thanks for caring and sharing ! When a NEW Member shares a sad Poem I always tell them that MPS is a very EMPATHETIC SITE. Do you agree ~ Yours BRIAN

                            • FredPeyer

                              Thanks so much Brian! You are right, this is an empathetic site.

                            • Poetic Dan

                              Thank you for this deep and wonderful feel to a very strong emotion of my pain and love.
                              Inspirational work my friend

                              • FredPeyer

                                Thank you so much PD. I always very much appreciate your kind comments. But please, if I write something stupid, I want to know that too!!!

                                • Poetic Dan

                                  I afraid the only way I'd use that word is if you was hateful, or over ego driven. But then I would even read your writings, so unless you are really good at hiding that side there's no chance.

                                • Baylee

                                  This is definitely something I have felt as well. Thank you for sharing

                                  • FredPeyer

                                    Thank you! If people had more empathy, this world would be a better place.

                                    • Baylee

                                      This is true



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