Souls Know.
Defying barriers of culture or race,
desire, bound in togetherness,
timeless as silence,
strong as the reaches of heaven, deeper
than endless unfathomable space
finds distance closes as separate fades
to disappear in contentment.
Fate smiles as it feeds itself lovers
for every new sunrise displays
clear as daylight
that souls know when they then become
fused identity, one and the same,
that destiny made them one single flame
which inhabits foreverness.
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Fay Slimm. (
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Fay you have such an incredible way with words! I do look forward every day to read your newest poem. Have no idea how you do it!
'Souls know when they become fused identity' = an incredible, beautiful way of saying I love you.
Great, great writing!
Good write, the souls fuse into one with all true lovers.
Your words felt like a gigantic hug, thank you Fay a perfect read in the morning to set a day of love!
Just read Santita's posting - must be the day for feel-good - great write Fay.
Thanks FAY ~ Wonderful uplifting thoughts for a Stressful Thursday Morning (First Academic Board of the New Term !) ~ I L Y ! TRUE LOVE ~ Like that between Angels & I ~ enables one to face the toughest assignments with a Smile. Please pray for William & Kate and Harry & Meghan as they represent the UK all over the World ~ but with love in their Hearts ! Pray also for the success of the Invictus Games in TORONTO which is a great outpouring of love by the Partners of the Wounded Veterans ~ LET THEIR BE LOVE~ LOVE CHANGES ALL THINGS ~ AMEN ! Love in the Spirit ~ BRIAN Your poem has lifted my Spirit to Paradise !
Good write Fay.
I love this poem! "defying barriers of culture or race..." was a great way to start this poem. It just personally struck me. And then the ending "made them one single flame.." truly defined what it means to have true love and togetherness. One of my favorites from you, Fay!
Very very good poem nice writing as poetic as it gets
"Souls know" says it all, and could stand alone as an epic poem of love. The rest of your poem is just the icing on a delicious cake, Fay!
A gratifying piece of love Fay. Kind and delicious read. Thanks for this.
Beautiful words again Fay. Seems your writing is chiming loud with me of late. For once again ths goes into my favourites. You're quite an amazing poet.
loving the ending to this one ''
that destiny made them one single flame
which inhabits foreverness.'' really quite lovely fay 🙂
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