Once More Her Hero.

Goldfinch60



THUMP! THUMP! THUMP!

Came the noise from above.

Had my wife fallen again?

I raced up the stairs,

“Are you alright?”

I shouted.

“No I am not!”

She replied!

“Come here quickly!”

So I raced into the room,

“It was coming at me!

Coming straight at me!

Make it go!”

I looked down

And saw my wife’s monster

Just sitting there,

Doing no harm.

I just picked up the spider

And gently put it out of the window.

Panic over,

I was once more her hero.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 5th, 2017 01:38
  • Comment from author about the poem: Once more I came to my wifes rescue.
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 43
  • Users favorite of this poem: MALU
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  • orchidee

    A fine write Gold. lol. We was 1066 heroes. Well, you were. I ruined it all!

  • Michael Edwards

    I can never understand the illogical dislike of spiders - there is a large one stung across the bay tree outside our conservatory who I speak to every morning - I call him Sydney. But the horror of them is so very real for many people. Fine write Andy.

    • Goldfinch60

      Is talking to spiders in the same sphere as talking to trees?
      Thank you Michael.

      • Michael Edwards

        No- you can spin a real yarn with spiders, whereas trees are barking mad.

      • Fay Slimm.

        A smile in the read for me Goldie - so many have fears of such cobwebby creatures. Hope your dear wife stays spiderless after her hero came to the rescue.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thanks you Fay, I am glad I brought a smile to you, my day is now made.

        • Accidental Poet

          I'm picturing you in a cape with a Superman pose. Goldie to the rescue. Great poem. ; )

          • Goldfinch60

            I thought that I had kept that a secret.
            Thank you AP.

            • Accidental Poet

              guess not, huh? ; )

            • Louis Gibbs

              Keep that shining armor polished, good knight! Great tale of rescuing your fair damsel ... an inspiration to knights everywhere.
              Good write, Goldie!

              • Goldfinch60

                The armour glistens in today's sunlight. Thank you Louis.

              • John Prophet

                Alls well that ends well.
                The White Knight one again
                victorious in battle,

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Collin, it was a hard battle but somebody had to do it.

                • orchidee

                  I just knew you wouldn't stomp on the spider and kill it off! 🙂 I'm the same. Well, I might kill wasps though.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Yes Orchi, I agree.

                  • malubotelho

                    Oh! I love to do this to my guys. Make them feel strong and necessary. I say, oh! I can not go outside because is a wasps flying there. And they say, don't worry mom I take care of that. So cute. Cute as your poem Goldie.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thanks Malu, your guys are strong and obviously loving towards you.

                    • WL Schuett

                      lol I'm the Spider-Man of my house also . Cool poem

                      • Goldfinch60

                        It is good to be the hero occasionally. Thank you WL.

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                      • w c

                        Thanks Goldfinch! I really enjoyed your poem. I've been working on a poem with spiders too. I'll probably publish it in the next couple days. Thanks again!

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Thank you WC, I'll look forward to reading your poem.

                        • FredPeyer

                          What I see in this beautiful poem of yours, Goldfinch, is not the spider. It is the love for your wife shown in every line.
                          You are a good man, Charlie Brown!

                          • Goldfinch60

                            I respect your words Linus.



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