My Heart Aches When You're Gone

Christina8

In the morning when hubby and kids leave me alone

Some of my day is spent on the computer or phone

Some of it I spend cleaning--I'm in the zone!

But my heart aches

 

I pick up the toys my daughter left behind

Already wish we could put the morning on rewind

I wonder what other treasures my daughter left me to find

But my heart misses you

 

Maybe I've had coffee with a friend

But that will come to an end

I can't wait to come home to you and tend

Because my heart knows it's almost time!

 

And then you all come rushing through the door!

I ask you how your day was. Sit and tell me I implore!

And hug you all and love you to your core!

Because my heart is happy!

  • Author: Christina (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 17th, 2017 06:49
  • Comment from author about the poem: The end of this poem is where my day starts--homework, supper, etc.
  • Category: Family
  • Views: 41
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  • orchidee

    A fine write Christina.

    • Christina8

      Thanks orchidee!

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      Thanks CHRIS ~ The GOOD BOOK says "God put the lonely in FAMILIES" and He has given you a lovely Family ~ so I can understand the loneliness when they are out at Work & School. At least they all come home every night ! Blessings & Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@@@@@

      • Christina8

        Thanks Brian for the encouragement! I appreciate the positive feedback. Sisterly hugs-CHristina

      • Goldfinch60

        Beautiful write showing how wonderful you and your family show each other love.

        • Christina8

          Thank you so much GF! I do miss them but at least they come home to me! Appreciate the read and the feedback!

        • Laura๐ŸŒป

          A beautiful write of a beautiful family Christina! It reminds me of the good old days. Now they're all grown up in different parts of the world with their own families to raise. And the circle of life continues!

          • Christina8

            Oh boy! I'm going to enjoy this while it lasts. Thanks for the read and the wonderful reply. Also appreciate the favorite save! Have a great day!

            • Laura๐ŸŒป

              Yes, enjoy every moment! They grow up so fast! When they were little, I wondered what they would be like as adults! Well, now I know! They are fine young people...but I do miss when the time they were young...especially from 0-3years old! That was the best...for me!

            • WL Schuett

              Where the poem ends your day begins I like that ... a very personal poem with a little insight to your day , very nice !

              • Christina8

                Thanks so much WL! Always appreciate your support and your kind review! ๐Ÿ™‚

              • Simple-Man87

                This was so beautiful. This woman loves her family. So nice to start my day with this. Thank you.

                • Christina8

                  Thanks SM! My day starts like this and ends with them. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks so much for the read and such a beautiful compliment!!

                • ron parrish aka wordman

                  love is a beautiful thing

                  • Christina8

                    I agree! Thanks for the visit and the reply!

                  • FredPeyer

                    Beautiful, tender poem, Christina. I agree with Laura, enjoy the kids as long as you can. Now I have to fly five hours to go and see them and the house is kind of empty with only the two of us. But there is happiness too in just enjoying each other.

                    • Christina8

                      Oh yes, I know the day will come. Thanks for the read and your kind words! Loved the reply, thanks!

                    • Poetic Dan

                      If I could do it again I'd home school them. Wonderful writing, maybe you should get a dog to walk and train ๐Ÿ˜‰

                      • Christina8

                        Good idea but we're allergic. ๐Ÿ™ I really appreciate your read and reply! Writing poetry helps me too. ๐Ÿ™‚



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