In my life I have been a child, a mother,
a wife, a model and a nurse.
Been rife with heartache and pain
and days I thought I was cursed
As the time has passed on in my
life I have found healing
I've found new friends along the
way which have made life more appealing
I don't have to look back at the
days gone by if I don't want to
I can focus on my life now and raising
my kids because that's what I need to do
Overcoming doubt and regret is still
something I am working to abolish
Like starting with a mountain of agony
it's gonna take real strength to demolish
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Christina (Pseudonym) (
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Beautifully written and with an honest heart. You've come so far in life, and you've a long way to go. With conviction and determination you'll achieve your goals with a pride and the love of your family.
Thanks so much AP for your support and wonderful feedback. Thanks so much. And I appreciate the favorite save!
HI CHRIS ~ Climb every Mountain ~ Ford every Stream ~ Look every problem straight in the eye ~ Til you fulfil your DREAM Thanks for caring and sharing ! I had my share of adversity in life ~ but (like you) in the end it makes us stronger and more resolved to succeed ! This ONE thing ~ I always try to do ! "Forgetting the events of the past ~ I press on to the prize of the high calling in Christ Jesus" ~ I trust and pray you will do the same. The future in this life is Blessing and then Paradise ~ AMEN ~ Every Blessing ~ Brotherly Hugs ~ BRIAN
Thanks Brian as always for your honesty and encouragement. Appreciated as ever. Sisterly hugs-Christina
A fine write Christina.
Thanks orchidee!!
mountains are made to climb,and i know you can,you are woman,just put on those hiking boots and get started
I was thinking of this giant mountain of all these feelings that I wanted to demolish. I don't know why, but I do. And I'm gonna start at the top and work my way through the pain and ugliness. Thats just my thoughts! Thanks for the read. I don't disagree with what you say. Your way sounds good too!
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Full of positivity - you'll always come through Christina - super reflection.
Thanks very much Michael! I always appreciate the read and compliment! Glad to see you back!
I loved the metaphor. Very well done Christina. Sometimes it most definitely feels like a mountain of agony. Thank you for sharing.
My pleasure to share. Thanks for the read and sharing your thoughts! My agony lies mostly in the past but it's something you do carry......Thanks again SM!
Christina love your poem, your honesty ,getting rid of the past even if it’s a shovel full at a time , you know you will move your mountain and that’s a beautiful thing ! I will look forward to watching your mountain disappear
Thanks so much, Bill! So glad you got what I was trying to say! A lot of my poems lately have been getting rid of the past. So, I'm getting to work at it! Thanks for your continued support. I appreciate it!
And with your gratitude for friends and their in put those doubts and regrets will mean less in your life dear Christina. A tenderly written resumé of life's challenges.
Thanks for your wonderful feedback and advice, Fay. Much appreciated!
Very good write. That mountain is there but each step along the way of life turns that mountain into lifes experience, experience can teach you the beauty of the life behind you and the ease of the life in front of you.
Thanks you GF for the read and the kind advice!
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