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As scion to the stock is grafted
once as strangers, now united.
I never pass a toilet by
and only pass in toilets.
- Author: Michael Edwards ( Offline)
- Published: October 22nd, 2017 00:14
- Comment from author about the poem: Serious and silly - can''t beat it for a Sunday. Plus an abstract which is really a bit dotty - I do know I felt a bit pollacked by the time I'd finished it.
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The second one is so true Michael, I can really relate to that one.
I do like the painting, so many different forms can be seen in it and they change all the time, it could require a lifetime of studying and even then not all would be seen.
Thanks Andy - seeing it on screen I feel a bit more work may improve it a tad - the area about one third in from the left is a bit 'hazy' so a bit more dotting is called for.
A fine couple and pic Michael. It's like one of those 'hidden pics' where you can find a face in it, or a number, as in those colour-blind tests.
Certainly hidden - have you 'spotted' it yet?
A pixillated offering if ever I saw one dear Michael and such patience in brushwork to get that result. A gorgeous picture and couplets to ponder for the weekend. The second one raised a relating smile for I do the same.
Al the time - even when you are not desperate - you never know !!
Love the ABSTRACT ~ Pointillism meets Jackson Pollock |~ awesome ! Love the lack of meaning in your doublets ~ I trust your HOSE is better ~ it's now the watering season ! Now I'm sounding as MAD as your are ! Yours BRIAN '
Seurock or Pollat - not sure which. Me mad? Never. The entire family have it all wrong!!
I do like your dotted painting. Always love your artwork. And two fine couplets. The second one is so silly!
Thanks Christina. The second one came to me last week in Funchal when I was desperate - had to dive inside a pavement café and pretend I was a customer all nonchalant like...!
It happens to everybody! Lol....
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