I arise in the morning
Full of life,
Full of energy,
I can achieve anything.
As the day progresses
The energy wanes,
The trials of the day
Pull me down,
Until that time at last
When the bed calls
And I go to sleep
Knowing that my good morning
Will be there when I awake.
Why can’t my mornings
Last all day long?
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I am definitely a morning person, that is when I do most of my writing.
- Category: Reflection
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You got an extra hour of morning soon. The one you didn't have at the end of March. What more can we want?! heehee.
I'm the same sometimes, yet can sit down of an evening other days. Not much on telly, and turn to writing.
That extra hour is owed to me so it's about time it was repaid.
Or as a grouch said: 'Good morning? What's good about it?!' lol
NEW EVERY MORNING is God's Love ~ Our wakening and uprising prove ~ Room to deny ourselves some good ~ To bring us daily nearer GOD ~ Got to make the MORNING LAST ~ Feelin' Groovy ! HI ANDY ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please taste my PUMPKIN SOUP ~ Thanks BRIAN
Thank you Brian.
Good morning to you too, ANDY!
Great write for a great read!
I’ve been loving my mornings more and more these days! Like an addict, I turn on my phone and go directly to MPS to quench my poetic thirst!
After an hour or so, I brew myself a cup of coffee and prep myself to face another day!
~ Laura~
Thank you Laura and good morning, my your days be filled with joy and wonder.
Thank you!
Oh I know this one - after lunch I can sleep for England but the mornings - that's the best time. If I don't start a job in morning it won't get done!!
Very true Michael, I always go upstairs to listen to music and read in the afternoon. At least that is what the excuse is!
I know! Great write! I could deal with an extra hour or two of morning. Good morning to you!
Thanks Christina, mornings are wonderful and ideal for writing.
Good morning I too find mornings the best of times , the most creative time and I do love coffee
Very true WL, I can get so much done in the mornings.
never a moment wasted is a great idea, especially the mornings after the body has rested, the mind ready to go and the coffee is smelling beautiful. let's rock n roll on these early morns.
Yep, I am up to rock n rolling in the mornings.
I too find peace and satisfaction in the mornings, but enjoy a totally different experience in the evenings when I do most of connecting with Muse.
Well written poem, as usual, Goldie!
Thank you Louis, my muse is always appears in the early morning, today it was about 3 am!!
G! I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. I too mourn for morn!
Thank you w c.
Great poem, Goldfinch! And you are right, the mornings disappear much too fast! Even though I usually get up at 5:30am, the next time I look at my watch it is noon. Crazy! And the older I get, the faster time seems to move.
Thank you Fred I get up a little later normally between 5:45 and 6:00 and as you say it soon become noon, it is crazy.
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