Christina8

Dancing In The Rain

The torrential rains that fall outside

try to mimic my tears

But I have no more tears to cry-

the first in many years

 

I go outside and the raindrops 

lick my cheeks where my tears once were

And it starts to bring joy to me 

A small feeling starts to stir

 

I realized I never got to dance in the rain

"Because you will catch cold!"

I stood out looking up to the sky with a smile

And I giggled without a thought to the scold

 

Well, I looked like a wet animal

and that I had just had a shower

But I'll tell you that by dancing

in the rain I had taken back more power

 

  • Author: Christina (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 24th, 2017 06:29
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Comments11

  • Laura🌻

    Beautiful Christina!
    Keep on dancing in the rain my lady
    and the power will be yours each day!
    It reminds me of ...
    “Dancing in the Rain”...a Gene Kelly movie.
    My mother loves it...and so do I!

    • Christina8

      Thanks for the read and your kind reply! I do appreciate it!

    • WL Schuett

      Beautiful, a dance but more ... independence and self discovery and awareness.... well done Christina!

      • Christina8

        Exactly! Thanks so much for your read and response. Very appreciated! Also thanks for making it a favorite!

      • kevin browne

        such a lovely write Christina. brings about the joy of good old wet weather. love it.

        • Christina8

          Oh, as long as it's raining and not a blizzard, right? Thanks for reading. Glad you liked it!

        • Goldfinch60

          Dancing in the rain is always life cleansing.

          • Christina8

            Yes, it is! Thank you Goldfinch!

          • orchidee

            It stopped raining there yet?! heehee.

            • Christina8

              It's definitely let up, but no. And it will rain all week. Thanks for your silly bit of humor!

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              RAIN DANCE ~ WOW ~ It's the Native American in you !

              Who has danced the solemn Rain Dance ?
              Called on Pluvius in a Rain Trance
              Who has touched the clouds and made them rain ?
              Shed you clothes ~ anticipation
              Join in dance ~ precipitation
              Fragrant showers will come again !

              Loved your RAIN DANCE ~ Christina ~ you sound so Happy ~ and you make all of us
              Happy with the sweet sunshine of your smile !

              I have danced NAKED in the rain ~ it is the most awesome feeling !

              HUGS in the RAIN ~ BRIAN @@@@@@@

              • Christina8

                Wow. Overshare! LOL Thanks for your enthusiastic reply. It is appreciated as always. I'm glad my poem made you happy. Sisterly hugs--Christina

              • Fay Slimm.

                You write about a favourite way of mine to shake off dark moods - go dance in the rain - or in the snow as I once did and loved it. A charming read on taking back power.

                • Christina8

                  Thank you so much Fay! I really appreciate your reading my poem and your thoughts on it! And the snow will be here soon too! 🙂 Thanks again!

                • skyebellasario

                  Loved it Christina! So uplifting 🙂

                  • Christina8

                    Thank you Skye, I really appreciate it! And thank you for making it a favorite!

                  • Michael Edwards

                    Super work C

                    • Christina8

                      Thank you so much Michael!!

                    • FredPeyer

                      A beautiful image, Christina! You know, dancing in the rain can stand for so much. It is exciting, maybe a little naughty, liberating, and totally fun! Great poem, well written!

                      • Christina8

                        Thank you so much Fred for reading and commenting! Very much appreciated!

                      • ron parrish aka wordman

                        it is a beautiful experience

                        • Christina8

                          Thanks ron, I appreciate it!



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