The torrential rains that fall outside
try to mimic my tears
But I have no more tears to cry-
the first in many years
I go outside and the raindrops
lick my cheeks where my tears once were
And it starts to bring joy to me
A small feeling starts to stir
I realized I never got to dance in the rain
"Because you will catch cold!"
I stood out looking up to the sky with a smile
And I giggled without a thought to the scold
Well, I looked like a wet animal
and that I had just had a shower
But I'll tell you that by dancing
in the rain I had taken back more power
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Christina (Pseudonym) (
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Beautiful Christina!
Keep on dancing in the rain my lady
and the power will be yours each day!
It reminds me of ...
“Dancing in the Rain”...a Gene Kelly movie.
My mother loves it...and so do I!
Thanks for the read and your kind reply! I do appreciate it!
Beautiful, a dance but more ... independence and self discovery and awareness.... well done Christina!
Exactly! Thanks so much for your read and response. Very appreciated! Also thanks for making it a favorite!
such a lovely write Christina. brings about the joy of good old wet weather. love it.
Oh, as long as it's raining and not a blizzard, right? Thanks for reading. Glad you liked it!
Dancing in the rain is always life cleansing.
Yes, it is! Thank you Goldfinch!
It stopped raining there yet?! heehee.
It's definitely let up, but no. And it will rain all week. Thanks for your silly bit of humor!
RAIN DANCE ~ WOW ~ It's the Native American in you !
Who has danced the solemn Rain Dance ?
Called on Pluvius in a Rain Trance
Who has touched the clouds and made them rain ?
Shed you clothes ~ anticipation
Join in dance ~ precipitation
Fragrant showers will come again !
Loved your RAIN DANCE ~ Christina ~ you sound so Happy ~ and you make all of us
Happy with the sweet sunshine of your smile !
I have danced NAKED in the rain ~ it is the most awesome feeling !
HUGS in the RAIN ~ BRIAN @@@@@@@
Wow. Overshare! LOL Thanks for your enthusiastic reply. It is appreciated as always. I'm glad my poem made you happy. Sisterly hugs--Christina
You write about a favourite way of mine to shake off dark moods - go dance in the rain - or in the snow as I once did and loved it. A charming read on taking back power.
Thank you so much Fay! I really appreciate your reading my poem and your thoughts on it! And the snow will be here soon too! 🙂 Thanks again!
Loved it Christina! So uplifting 🙂
Thank you Skye, I really appreciate it! And thank you for making it a favorite!
Super work C
Thank you so much Michael!!
A beautiful image, Christina! You know, dancing in the rain can stand for so much. It is exciting, maybe a little naughty, liberating, and totally fun! Great poem, well written!
Thank you so much Fred for reading and commenting! Very much appreciated!
it is a beautiful experience
Thanks ron, I appreciate it!
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