Winter approaches
A fleecy cinerous sky
The promise of snow.
A sweet probing tongue
Caressing strokes delivered
Sharp edges cut deep.
Declining sunlight.
Mysterious expanses
Mile on sombre mile
- Author: Michael Edwards ( Offline)
- Published: October 25th, 2017 00:00
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 44
Comments11
Michael, for these three I would gladly have paid the full triple price!
Do you want my bank details or would you rather pay by cheque? lol ๐ Thanks so much Fred.
Don't know if it would be enough, but I do have some Monopoly money left over.
Very good write(s) Michael.
Thanks Andy.
Fine thoughtful writes Michael. *gets out dictionary for cinerous*.
So did I ...!
Michael,
This makes me think of cozily sitting by the fireplace on a snowy evening! Beautiful painting to illustrate poem. Very nostalgic! Thank you!
~Laura~
Thank you Laura - yes I can see it with a whiskey mac
A very fine poem with another lovely painting , you are doing great work Michael
I try Bill - as my friends constantly remind me: I'm very trying.
I like the 5-7-5's, I quite like all 3! Beautiful painting!
Thanks Christina - appreciated.
Here we say, buy one get two free. Love the paint. so peaceful, an ideal place for vacation.
I say: I only want two - can I have the free ones please lol ๐
For you, Yes.
That second stanza did it for me in this 5 7 5 posting of super quality - watercolour is first rate too.
Thank you Fay - it's great when you come up with something a bit special - and then you wonder where it came from and whether you'll be able to repeat it.
These were really well done. The second one adds a different tone, a sensual one. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks so much for looking in and for your kind words S-M
No wonder the CHINESE are ruling the World Haiku ~ Senryu ~ Tankas eetc are so concise and always awesome ! Loved 1. Cold outside Love 2. Hot inside Love 3. Love's Labour Lost Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
Thanks Brian - five more today.
you are right on beat
Thanks for your kind comment Ron.
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.