AT LAST IN LOVE
Once undisposed to gather lilies
which grow in unattended lands
but now with eagerness to pluck
and place them in her tender hands.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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- Comment from author about the poem: The second of the two painted versions plus a shortie.
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I've gotta tell ya Mr. E ...that is quite beautiful.
That's most generous of you and thanks for saving it - I'm honoured.
Very good write, I do hope she appreciated the flowers.
Lilly certainly did - thanks Andy.
Lovely watercolor castle. Nice poem about the lilies--love lilies so much! Great combo!
Thanks Christina,
Good write and pic again Michael. She got those lilies now?!
Yes he plucked them - he's a very good plucker...!
To paint one of these pieces would be a success but to produce two different moods - - - loud applause for your watercolour offerings and of course that romantic verse too Michael.
Thanks for your kind words Fay
Seek Michael and you will find ~ TRUE LOVE ! Loving the Stately Home ~ Reminds me of CHATSWORTH which I have often visited in All Seasons.
Love your Love Poem ~ short but very sweet ! Today mine in longer (four Quintains !) but the sentiment is the same 1 Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
Thank you as always Brian
Have to say Michael, I liked the last painting better.
As for the poem. Yes, love changes us, something we would not do in the past, we now do willingly.
Yes it was the precious one I chose for the exhibition - thanks Fred.
Another fine painting , I like your little poem Lillies for Lilly
Think I like your title better Bill - thanks for the comment.
The latest version of the art has become dark and foreboding. While the short poem is quite tender and warm. Is there a Jeckle and Hyde lurking in you today, Michael? Good write!
Sort of sweet and sour - thanks for looking in Louis.
I can only wish I had your artistic talent Michael.
You're too kind - do appreciate your encouragement AP.
Perfect Michael!
This last version of your painting and the poem is my favorite!
So pleased you like them Laura.
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The feeling of the two paintings are so dramatic. This one feel a bit melancholy, but the poem is so beautiful.
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