Michael Edwards

AT LAST IN LOVE

 

 

AT LAST IN LOVE 

 

Once undisposed to gather lilies

which grow in unattended lands

but now with eagerness to pluck

and place them in her tender hands.

 

 

 

Comments13

  • Mugsdaddy

    I've gotta tell ya Mr. E ...that is quite beautiful.

    • Michael Edwards

      That's most generous of you and thanks for saving it - I'm honoured.

    • Goldfinch60

      Very good write, I do hope she appreciated the flowers.

      • Michael Edwards

        Lilly certainly did - thanks Andy.

      • Christina8

        Lovely watercolor castle. Nice poem about the lilies--love lilies so much! Great combo!

      • orchidee

        Good write and pic again Michael. She got those lilies now?!

        • Michael Edwards

          Yes he plucked them - he's a very good plucker...!

        • Fay Slimm

          To paint one of these pieces would be a success but to produce two different moods - - - loud applause for your watercolour offerings and of course that romantic verse too Michael.

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          Seek Michael and you will find ~ TRUE LOVE ! Loving the Stately Home ~ Reminds me of CHATSWORTH which I have often visited in All Seasons.
          Love your Love Poem ~ short but very sweet ! Today mine in longer (four Quintains !) but the sentiment is the same 1 Yours as ever ~ BRIAN

        • FredPeyer

          Have to say Michael, I liked the last painting better.
          As for the poem. Yes, love changes us, something we would not do in the past, we now do willingly.

          • Michael Edwards

            Yes it was the precious one I chose for the exhibition - thanks Fred.

          • WL Schuett

            Another fine painting , I like your little poem Lillies for Lilly

            • Michael Edwards

              Think I like your title better Bill - thanks for the comment.

            • Louis Gibbs

              The latest version of the art has become dark and foreboding. While the short poem is quite tender and warm. Is there a Jeckle and Hyde lurking in you today, Michael? Good write!

              • Michael Edwards

                Sort of sweet and sour - thanks for looking in Louis.

              • Accidental Poet

                I can only wish I had your artistic talent Michael.

                • Michael Edwards

                  You're too kind - do appreciate your encouragement AP.

                • Laura

                  Perfect Michael!
                  This last version of your painting and the poem is my favorite!

                  • Michael Edwards

                    So pleased you like them Laura.

                    • Laura

                      😊

                    • Dear--JaneDoe

                      beautiful, really lovely poem :)

                      • Michael Edwards

                        I appreciate your kind comments - thank you.

                      • myself and me

                        The feeling of the two paintings are so dramatic. This one feel a bit melancholy, but the poem is so beautiful.



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