Voiceless.
There exists silence not found by sound,
..........
in the heart of a desert or deep
under oceans
...........
where, mutely profound,
voiceless vibrations intend to be given
full hearing for
destined truth their presence propounds
...........
thus when two
human souls meet fate and exchange
first rapt greetings
they commit by belief, tho' not aloud,
in silent speaking
to transfer desire of twin-flame feelings
..........
knowing love's
secret whispers never need sound.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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Ah that last line is a masterpiece wrapping it up so well.
Thought you would pick out that final thought Michael - so pleased it meant something special to you.
That is so beautiful. That last line summed it up so well! Wonderful job!
Yes you dear Christina would have found something special in a tribute to twin-flamed love. So glad you enjoyed the read.
Beautifully thought out Fay , you conveyed it wonderfully. Great poem
Thank you sincerely dear W.L. - -- I appreciate your visit and read.
Thanks for sharing FAY "We all say it best when we say NOTHING AT ALL !" Yours silently ~ BRIAN
Too true dear Brian - thank you so much for your visit and read.
Ah, the undeniable power of unspoken communication between twin-flame souls. One is blessed indeed to have experienced it on this plane of existence.
Beautifully described in this remarkable poem, Fay!
Your perceptive and thoughtful comments always light up my day dear Louis and thank you for all your support - yes indeed twin-flamed love is something special.
Lovely write Fay.
Many thanks Orchi.
oh my god..... so true.
one of lifes great mysteries, love and what it does to us.
Yes I agree - what an immense mystery - so pleased you enjoyed the need of no sound when true love is felt.
They certainly don't! Love that last line Fay. Beautiful poem, so well written.
Ah- humble thanks Fred for your continued support - love is certainly a soundless feeling.
The true love in voiceless is so profound.
Thank you for your visit and kind comment on the powerful silence true love emits - profound indeed is its depth.
"There exists silence not found by sound," "secret whispers" of love. "In the heart of the desert," " deep under oceans." How many times do those without love write of being in a desert, or of feeling as though drowning? How many times do lovers write of communicating without words? I believe you have summed up the universe of Love. Wow! - Phil A.
Another good write and that last stanza is so right, love is soundless.
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