ANGELA and I live very
Near a sandy beach and often
Go walking barefoot along the shore.
Everyone loves Angela ~ so
Lovely and graceful and slim ~ like
A Moovie Star on Location !
One by One the birds swoop around
Noticing how dove-like she is
A pure white Dove ~ gracing their beach !
Beaches everywhere are full of
Exotic Ladies ~ but none is
As serene and elegant ~ or
Causes flutter like Angela
Her presence transforms EVERYTHING !
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ BRIAN XOX
This Poem is presented as a Blank Verse (iambic
tetrameter ~ 8 syllables per line) Acrostic Sonnet.
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 3rd, 2017 02:22
- Category: Love
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Good write Brian. I'm not seeing it very well. It seems fuzzy. (Well, change the contrast, Orchi!). But I can see other poems clearly.
Thanks STEVE ~ It's called "True Love Focus" ~ It brings tears of JOY to my eyes as well ! The Local Council pay her to grace the beach every day ~ sales of ice cream and ice-cold coke go through the roof when ANGELA appears like a "Bare Foot Madonna" ~ Hot flushes do dim the vision ! Yours BRIAN
Ahh, that explains it then. It\'s not me contrast control gone funny! lol. But it is a light colour. Maybe needs to be a bit darker. We'll be squinting to read it otherwise.
She must be some lady - the poem serves her so well.
WELL MICHAEL ~ Just like you ~ I consider the current "Lady in my Life" to be the BEST ~ and yes she really is ! Thanks for your comment ~ BRIAN
We are both blessed Brian.
Brian, no kidding, your poem reminds me of my wife walking the beaches with me here in Hawaii. There are so many beautiful girls and ladies, but for me there was always only one: her!
Thanks FRED ~ I've been to Hawaii and the local Ladies are BEAUTIFUL both in appearance and character. Like you I am a one-woman GUY ! BRIAN
Buongiorno
Caro Amico Brian!
Beautiful poem for
your beautiful Angela!
Saluti e abbracci...
~Laura~
Caio LAURA ~ Cara Amica Mia ~ So pleased you loved my tribute to "My Beautiful Angela on the Beach !" Amore e Abbracci ~ Brian e Angela XOXOX
You are a lucky man and Angela is a lucky woman! It is wonderful to be in love! You must be so proud. What a lovely read. Great watercolor! Wow! --Christina
Thanks CHRISTINA ~ for a lovely comment straight from your heart to ours ! Pleased you liked the painting ~ Angela's natural beauty shines through ! It's amazing how all the Sea Birds flock round her when she steps out on the Beach ! Just like you I am at my best poetically when I'm writing about me Beloved ! Every blessing ~ Love & Hugs ~ ANGELA & BRIAN XOXOX
Beautiful living write Brian.
Thanks for your incisiveness ANDY it is an bursting with Vitality & Love ~ because of the Subject ~ ANGELA. Thanks for caring ~ Yours Angela & Brian.
She sounds like a lovely woman! Hope you two are happy!
THANKS ANNA ~ If you met her ~ You would love her ~ Yes we are both very HAPPY ! Yours ANGELA & BRIAN XOX
Very well done. I enjoyed it. What a lovely romantic start to the day.
You are so lucky to have such a lovely lady, and she is so lucky to have your love. Nice writing.
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