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Laura🌻

To the exstinguished lights 

Amazingly bright

Place right hand over your heart 

Sustain those who remain 

  • Author: Laura🌻 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 11th, 2017 12:18
  • Comment from author about the poem: Remembering my three friends who died servicing our country and all others who have/are servicing our country!
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 69
  • Users favorite of this poem: Fay Slimm.
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  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    GRAZIE LAURA ~ SEVERAL of my Grandparents Family died or were wounded in WW2 and I have acquaintances wounded in Iraq & Afghanistan ~ I live in a Garrison Town ~ We always REMEMBER THEM ~ Thinking of YOU and your memories ~ Bacci e Abbracci BRIAN XOXOX

    • Laura🌻

      Grazie Brian!
      I appreciate your read and comments!

    • Michael Edwards

      So much said in so few words - congrats Laura

      • Laura🌻

        Thank you Michael!
        Your read and comment is
        very much appreciated!

      • orchidee

        A fine write and tribute Laura.

        • Laura🌻

          Thank you Orchi!
          Your read and comment is very much appreciated!

        • FredPeyer

          Laura, I am sorry about your three friends. Your poem is outstanding. You packed a lot of meaning, feeling, and emotion into these four short lines. Kudos!

          • Laura🌻

            Fred,
            Your read, comments, and compliments are very much appreciated! Very kind of you!

          • Goldfinch60

            Good write and tribute.

            • Laura🌻

              Gold,
              Thank you for the read and compliment!

            • HChristian74

              Beautiful! I adore how you say in such a fine selection of few words, what it would take me 100 times the syllables to even attempt and I would still never paint the images you paint so well. Excellent! You're a gift!

              HC

              • Laura🌻

                HC,
                Thank you for the
                read and your
                compliments!
                Too generous!

                ~Laura~

              • Simple-Man87

                This was beautiful, so much said, with not much written. True talent.

                • Laura🌻

                  S-M87,
                  Thank you for your comment and compliment! Very kind of you!

                • Neville

                  Excellent.. quite unique and clearly needed to be written and posted... much enjoyed despite the tragedies that inspired you... Neville

                  • Laura🌻

                    Neville,

                    Thank you for the read and comments! Very kind of you! Your visit is very much appreciated!

                    ~Laura~

                    • Neville

                      always a pleasure..

                      ~Neville~

                    • Fay Slimm.

                      An amazing tribute to those who now gone left behind a reason to "sustain those who remain." - This has to be among my favourites dear Laura.

                      • Laura🌻

                        My Dear Fay,

                        Thank you for saving this poem as one of your favorites and for sharing your thoughts about it! I cherish your exceptional comments! You are so very kind my friend!

                        ~Laura~



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