To the exstinguished lights
Amazingly bright
Place right hand over your heart
Sustain those who remain
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Author:
Laura🌻 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Remembering my three friends who died servicing our country and all others who have/are servicing our country!
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 69
- Users favorite of this poem: Fay Slimm.
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GRAZIE LAURA ~ SEVERAL of my Grandparents Family died or were wounded in WW2 and I have acquaintances wounded in Iraq & Afghanistan ~ I live in a Garrison Town ~ We always REMEMBER THEM ~ Thinking of YOU and your memories ~ Bacci e Abbracci BRIAN XOXOX
Grazie Brian!
I appreciate your read and comments!
So much said in so few words - congrats Laura
Thank you Michael!
Your read and comment is
very much appreciated!
A fine write and tribute Laura.
Thank you Orchi!
Your read and comment is very much appreciated!
Laura, I am sorry about your three friends. Your poem is outstanding. You packed a lot of meaning, feeling, and emotion into these four short lines. Kudos!
Fred,
Your read, comments, and compliments are very much appreciated! Very kind of you!
Good write and tribute.
Gold,
Thank you for the read and compliment!
Beautiful! I adore how you say in such a fine selection of few words, what it would take me 100 times the syllables to even attempt and I would still never paint the images you paint so well. Excellent! You're a gift!
HC
HC,
Thank you for the
read and your
compliments!
Too generous!
~Laura~
This was beautiful, so much said, with not much written. True talent.
S-M87,
Thank you for your comment and compliment! Very kind of you!
Excellent.. quite unique and clearly needed to be written and posted... much enjoyed despite the tragedies that inspired you... Neville
Neville,
Thank you for the read and comments! Very kind of you! Your visit is very much appreciated!
~Laura~
always a pleasure..
~Neville~
An amazing tribute to those who now gone left behind a reason to "sustain those who remain." - This has to be among my favourites dear Laura.
My Dear Fay,
Thank you for saving this poem as one of your favorites and for sharing your thoughts about it! I cherish your exceptional comments! You are so very kind my friend!
~Laura~
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