CHRISTMAS ~ We all get EXCITED
EXCITED about presents and TREES !
TREES feature in every Season ~ YES ?
YES of course ~ but Christmas Trees are SPECIAL
SPECIAL 'cos of Lights and PRESENTS
PRESENTS ~ sitting under Tree for DAYS
DAYS of anticipation ~ For clues we feel the PARCELS
PARCELS of every substance ~ shape & SIZE
SIZE matters at Christmas ~ we all want a big ONE !
ONE we can show to our Friends and SAY .......
SAY what ? My Cell Phone is slimmer than YOURS
YOURS looks like a WALKIE ~ TALKIE
TALKIE ~ WALKIE a 1950's DESIGNER !
DESIGNER Presents ~ Designer Trees ~ Designer CHRISTMAS !
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love BRIAN XOX
In a FLOW POEM each line must begin with the last WORD
in the preceding line ! The final WORD must be the same as
the first WORD ! Try one they're not as difficult as they look !
I have CAPITALISED the first and last words in each line to
emphasise that it is a FLOW POEM ~ OK ~ BRIAN XOXOX
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 13th, 2017 04:16
- Comment from author about the poem: C H R I S T M A S ~ Has a magical sound ~ and it means different things to everybody everywhere ! The key words in My Extended Family are LOVE & GENEROSITY ~ Because that's how GOD meant it to be ! GOD LOVED the Human Race so so much that he gave US His One & Only Son ~ JESUS ~ to live on Earth and die on a CROSS to forgive US and liberate US from our SIN ! More than that GOD promised the if we accept JESUS as our SAVIOUR ~ He would give US Eternal Life ! (John 3 v 16) GOD's greatest gift to the World and YOU & I individually. That is why we all give LOVE & GIFTS to all our Family & Friends @ CHRISTMAS and like GOD we don't count the COST ~ AMEN ! Love to All ~ BRIAN XOX
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A fine write Brian.
Thanks STEVE ~ I know how much you love ~ The Singing ~ The eating and The Sherry etc. ! PLEASE STOP sampling all those goodies ~ and feeling all those parcels ~ WAIT 'TIL CHRISTMAS ~ Yours BRIAN
Heehee I shall have drunk all the sherry - and who ate all the pies? Me! - before Christmas. It won't be merry for ya, but it will be for me! You'll know it's me at ya door Carol Singing. But you'll think it's two cats fighting, and you'll chuck a bucket of water over me!
With this sort of poem, it\'ll be CC-HH-RR-II-SS-TT-MM-AA-SS, what with the endings and beginnings of the lines! It\'s \'sad\' how I think these things up. Have I nothing better to do?! But - I counted the cost of my sherry - all for me!
I have never heard of a flow poem before but you're quite good at it! Love the picture! Wonderful poem! Christmas hugs-Christina
Thanks CHRISTINA ~ Well as you know I am a Performance POET and for good recitation at a Poetry Reading ~ every POEM should flow ! You are a Sassy Adventurous Lady ~ You should try one for yourself ! I know how much you love all aspects of CHRISTMAS and I know your TREE will look just like that on CHRISMAS DAY ~ Advent Hugs for my Best MPS Lady ! BRIAN "Every Day is Christmas Day ~ AMEN !"
Good fun write.
Yes ANDY our ODES can be a little sombre at times ~ AND RIGHTLY SO ! However I injected a little linguistic lolloping laughter into \"My ODE for Monday !\" BRIAN
Great work and something else for me to try.
You have perfected the flow poem with your exciting and seasonal sonnet dear Brian - a delight to read.
Thanks FAY ~ Lovely comment ~ I'm always excited during the Christmas Period ~ it compensates for the cold weather ~ which is why it isn't in JUNE ! Yours in every Season ~ BRIAN
Hi BRIANSODES,
You have certainly captured the essence of Xmas with your poem.
Good stuff!
Keep writing
FineB!
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