Making Believe.
Shimmer enmisted dark sea and dune
cover night's secrets
in ebony blanket to capture the magic
of pretend honeymoon.
Seashore encrusted and hazily floating,
the two, pleasure-seekers
make honeyed love, lying cave-hidden
by tide's ebbing coat.
Making believe they own all the beach
their granite divan
becomes love-softened before blissful
and kiss-filled they sleep.
Lovers must take what comes from fate
yet now coupled these
two know how to sweeten their waiting.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A bit of fun-scribbling after seeing the picture.
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Comments9
That sweetness can be wonderful Fay. Good write as usual.
Thank you dear friend.
Thanks FAY ~ Poems inspired by Pictures are always an inspiration ! I adore the experience of Love Alfresco and your poem stirred memories long past ~ and recent beach interludes with ANGELA ! Thanks for caring & sharing and "love warming" a very cold and frosty morning ! We love all your poems & pictures (especially this one !) Love Brian & Angela XOX
You are most kind Brian and I really appreciate all the support you give to my work.
Another great write Fay.
Such a beautiful poem make the view so romantic.
A fine write again Fay.
Fay, you've captured the photo so well in your poem. Beautiful poem for a beautiful photo.
And what a sweet way to pass the time it is. The harsh can come later, as it always does.
A well written and well presented poem here, Fay!
Wonderful write
A wonderful and sweet poem, Fay! As lovers, they can sweeten their waiting for quite a while I suppose! Perfect picture to match your description of them!
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