when he looked up
to the sky
the stars shone
darkness filled spaces
between points
of light
from here on the ground
the next place
seemed so very far
he selected a stone
to reach the heart
of the moon
and it rose high
then it turned
to fall at his feet
~
inter-star travel
should be driven
by dreams
imagine!
how far
he could go
fueled by his desire
the hope in his heart
would take him
past Jupiter ...
... could take him
away
to the stars
~
when I look up
to the night
I see stars shine
~
- Author: Frank Prem ( Offline)
- Published: November 18th, 2017 00:24
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments6
I love your format and the thoughts which each stanza invoke - have read it twice and will return again later - super stuff Frank.
Thank you Michael. Encouragement leads to more.
very very dope. you ask a lot from a reader, and that's admirable - shows trust
Cheers Will. Glad you enjoyed the piece.
Good write and I too have that dream, lets us go to the stars.
Thanks GF. Let's do it!
When ya going? Can I come too?! heehee.
Get aboard, O. Leaving soon.
You getting the No.7 bus there? Or is it No.11 goes there?!
Thanks FRANK ~ There is only ine sure route ~ that endorsed by the RAF "Ad Astra per Ardua" ~ Yours BRIAN. Please check ZIMBABWE ~ Thanks B.
Hey Brian. Thank you. Hard to believe Mugabe might be gone soon. Will wait and see.
Strap in for your flight.
Frank,
I read LOOKING UP a few times!
Through hard work we will reach the stars!
Great write!
Beam me up, Scotty!
We can only hope, Laura. Thank you.
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