Caught.
Swirling in oily rainbowing movement
the bubble traps time,
wraps beauty around eternity and vibrates
its world of fluidity.
Excelling in jailed soapy space-restraint
orb creates and encases
in outer fragile-thin globular skin layers
of gossamer jewellery.
Look closely at see-thru' glassy sphere
and its tiny potential
caught in a universe of wondrous hues
swirling entombed yet alive.
Then in bursting lets fall what was first
indescribable but now
disappeared bubble's enchanting magic
awes any inner-child's mind.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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Beautiful write, may that bubble never burst.
The use of language can only come from the magic which enchants - love it Fay.
Yes you're right, they are awesome structures. I haven't seen any for quite some time. Your fine words evoke a memory, thank you.
you caught me and I fell straight into your bubble. great wording, Fay Slimm.
Enchanting and well presented, Fay! Brings back childhood memories of awe at new experiences.
This bubble burst in a poetry way.
Thanks FAY ~ First let me say ~ I love your new PHOTO ~ very attractive ~ looks like a Lady ready to party @ CHRISTMAS ! I love the simplicity (and the awesomeness) of BUBBLES ~ so elegant and yet so fragile (like some Ladies I know !) Reflections in Bubbles are always ethereal and of course the disappear when "The Bubble bursts" just like in real life ! All the KIDS I know (in my Extended Family & at Church) love Bubbles and I always give them those bubble making kits which keeps them amused for hours ! Thanks for sharing ~ when I read you poem ~ I blew some Bubbles of my own ~ I'm just a kid at heart ~ Bubble Hugs ~ BRIAN OOOOOOO (A Bubble for each day !)
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