MY SWEET ANGEL ~ Fallen from Grace

Perfect her figure ~ fair of face

From whence she fell ~ I can't tell

Maybe HEAVEN ~ Maybe HELL !

Her touch Heaven ~ but her KISS

Burning ~ yearning ~ from Abyss

MY SWEET ANGEL ~ Fallen from Grace

Perfect her figure ~ fair of face !


Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love BRIAN XOX


This Poem is presented as an OCTELLE ~ Introduced

yesterday by MICHAEL. It has a strict rhyme pattern

AA bb cc AA (capital denotes a repeated line) ~ OK.


Many of my Female Friends work in the Health Service

or as Teachers ! They are all UNFALLEN ANGELS ~ AMEN !  



  • Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 25th, 2017 04:23
  • Comment from author about the poem: Many of my Lady Friends work in Teaching and the Health Services ~ they are all (unfallen) ANGELS ! I am a College Lecturer (Applied Science) and I try to be a ANGEL to my Students ~ The majority of whom are ANGELS ! My Students & Colleagues & Family & Friends are all Angelic (I should be so Blessed) and are there for me in the GOOD times and especially the BAD. Many of them are MPS Members ~ THANKS BRIAN XOX
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 30
  • User favorite of this poem: LaurašŸŒ».
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  • Michael Edwards

    Well done you - a great octelle - I do like this form and may try some more


      Thanks MICHEL for you kind words ! Octelles (in essence only SIX lines) long enough to make sense and short enough to be read ! They also contain FOUR essential "R's" of good poetry ! Rhyme ~ Rhythm ~ Repetition ~ Reason ~ OK ! BRIAN

      • Michael Edwards

        Plus the fourth 'R' - the Writer - well okay I'm stretching it a bit - but it sounds like an 'R'

      • orchidee

        A fine write Brian.

      • Louis Gibbs

        So, does this mean you and Angel have parted ways?

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          Thanks for your concern LOUIS ! NO ~ I have many ANGELS (Yin & Yang) who come and go but there is only one ANGELA and we will be together "Not for the Years of time alone ~ but for Eternity ! Yours BRIAN

          • Louis Gibbs

            Glad to hear it, Brian! Congratulations.

          • Christina8

            A great Octelle--new to me, but you did a wonderful job! Love the rhymes! Picture goes so well with your poem.
            Sisterly hugs-Christina

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              Thanks CHRIS ~ a great classical form ! It has Rhyme ~ Rhythm ~ Repetition & Reason ! I was pleased with the Picture it does indeed complement ! I hope you liked my tribute to Health Workers ! Angelic Hugs ~ BRIAN Please read the comment I added to the POEM ~ it got mixed off ~ ENJOY thanks B @@@@@@@

            • Shadowbox15

              Lovely poem. I enjoy the imagery.

              • BRIAN & ANGELA

                Thanks SHADOW ~ Pleased you liked it ~ Yours BRIAN

              • Tony36

                Beautiful write

              • LaurašŸŒ»

                Mio Caro Amico BRIAN...
                Great poem! I absolutely adore the Angel picture! Angels are our friends
                ...always there to walk beside us, to guide us, and to love us! We all have our Angels! We are truly blessed!
                Abbracci e dolci baci...

                • BRIAN & ANGELA

                  GRAZIE MIA CARA LAURA ~ Pleased you enjoyed the POEM and the PICTURE. I love ANGELS and have encountered them ! We can be used by GOD as Human Angels to help folk in need. We have Coffee Mornings in our Church and some Rough Sleepers (HOBOS !) come and can also have a wash & a shave and a haircut ~ all FREE ~ All our Ladies in the Church (and some of the Men !) are ANGELS ~ God Bless You ! Baci dolci e Abbracci forte BRIAN XOXOX

                  • LaurašŸŒ»

                    Tu sei uno dei miei ANGELI! Ti adoro mio caro amico!

                  • 1 more comment

                  • Makenna.M

                    First of your poems I've read and good job it was beautiful!

                    • BRIAN & ANGELA

                      Thanks MM ~ please you liked it ! I like my POEM and the PIGTURE to be harmonious ~ Yours BRIAN

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Very good write Brian.

                      • BRIAN & ANGELA

                        Thanks ANDY ~ pleased you enjoyed it ~ Yours BRIAN

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