MY SWEET ANGEL ~ Fallen from Grace
Perfect her figure ~ fair of face
From whence she fell ~ I can't tell
Maybe HEAVEN ~ Maybe HELL !
Her touch Heaven ~ but her KISS
Burning ~ yearning ~ from Abyss
MY SWEET ANGEL ~ Fallen from Grace
Perfect her figure ~ fair of face !
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love BRIAN XOX
This Poem is presented as an OCTELLE ~ Introduced
yesterday by MICHAEL. It has a strict rhyme pattern
AA bb cc AA (capital denotes a repeated line) ~ OK.
Many of my Female Friends work in the Health Service
or as Teachers ! They are all UNFALLEN ANGELS ~ AMEN !
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 25th, 2017 04:23
- Comment from author about the poem: Many of my Lady Friends work in Teaching and the Health Services ~ they are all (unfallen) ANGELS ! I am a College Lecturer (Applied Science) and I try to be a ANGEL to my Students ~ The majority of whom are ANGELS ! My Students & Colleagues & Family & Friends are all Angelic (I should be so Blessed) and are there for me in the GOOD times and especially the BAD. Many of them are MPS Members ~ THANKS BRIAN XOX
- Category: Love
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Comments9
Well done you - a great octelle - I do like this form and may try some more
Thanks MICHEL for you kind words ! Octelles (in essence only SIX lines) long enough to make sense and short enough to be read ! They also contain FOUR essential "R's" of good poetry ! Rhyme ~ Rhythm ~ Repetition ~ Reason ~ OK ! BRIAN
Plus the fourth 'R' - the Writer - well okay I'm stretching it a bit - but it sounds like an 'R'
A fine write Brian.
So, does this mean you and Angel have parted ways?
Thanks for your concern LOUIS ! NO ~ I have many ANGELS (Yin & Yang) who come and go but there is only one ANGELA and we will be together "Not for the Years of time alone ~ but for Eternity ! Yours BRIAN
Glad to hear it, Brian! Congratulations.
A great Octelle--new to me, but you did a wonderful job! Love the rhymes! Picture goes so well with your poem.
Sisterly hugs-Christina
Thanks CHRIS ~ a great classical form ! It has Rhyme ~ Rhythm ~ Repetition & Reason ! I was pleased with the Picture it does indeed complement ! I hope you liked my tribute to Health Workers ! Angelic Hugs ~ BRIAN Please read the comment I added to the POEM ~ it got mixed off ~ ENJOY thanks B @@@@@@@
Lovely poem. I enjoy the imagery.
Thanks SHADOW ~ Pleased you liked it ~ Yours BRIAN
Beautiful write
Mio Caro Amico BRIAN...
Great poem! I absolutely adore the Angel picture! Angels are our friends
...always there to walk beside us, to guide us, and to love us! We all have our Angels! We are truly blessed!
Abbracci e dolci baci...
~Laura~
GRAZIE MIA CARA LAURA ~ Pleased you enjoyed the POEM and the PICTURE. I love ANGELS and have encountered them ! We can be used by GOD as Human Angels to help folk in need. We have Coffee Mornings in our Church and some Rough Sleepers (HOBOS !) come and can also have a wash & a shave and a haircut ~ all FREE ~ All our Ladies in the Church (and some of the Men !) are ANGELS ~ God Bless You ! Baci dolci e Abbracci forte BRIAN XOXOX
Tu sei uno dei miei ANGELI! Ti adoro mio caro amico!
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First of your poems I've read and good job it was beautiful!
Thanks MM ~ please you liked it ! I like my POEM and the PIGTURE to be harmonious ~ Yours BRIAN
Very good write Brian.
Thanks ANDY ~ pleased you enjoyed it ~ Yours BRIAN
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