WINTER LUNES (5 3 5) !

BRIAN & ANGELA

 

 

 

SNOWMEN cold as ice

snow bodies

snow heads & snow balls !

 

ROBINS ~ Great Britain's

Bird of Choice

Such a fine Red Breast !

 

HOLLY & IVY

deck the pew

Christmas has arrived !

 

Homeless ~ Huddled ~ Homme

Blanket wrapped 

NO GIFT ~ Christmas Eve !

 

Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love BRIAN  XOX 

 

  • Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 30th, 2017 05:21
  • Category: Nature
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  • Michael Edwards

    Two lunatics today - great collection Brian.

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      THE Problem is MICHAEL ~ that STRUCTURALES LUNES PEOETICAS is contagious ~ soon they'll all be at it ! Thanks for the memory and thanks for the complement ! BRIAN

    • myself and me

      Lovely lunes.

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Thanks M & M ~ Lunes are like Tunes ~ they pass through your mind and stay in your heart ~ Yours BRIAN Hugs for Christmas ~ BRIAN @@@

      • Goldfinch60

        Lune away Brian.

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          Thanks ANDY ~ "By the light of the Moon ~ I love to LUNE ! Yours BRIAN

        • Tony36

          Great write

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          Thanks TONY ~ pleased you liked it ~ BRIAN

        • Christina8

          Love the lunes--Someone talking about christmas besides me! lol Very nice 5-7--5s! And the snowman pic! Great job on these. Snowman hugs-Christina

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            WELL CHRIS ~ Theoretically it starts on FRIDAY ~ we always have Advent Calendars ! Pleased you liked the LUNES ~ They are 5 3 5 by the way 5 7 5 are Haiku or Senryu ~ Tankas are longer 5 7 5 7 7 ~ OK ~ Hope you are having a nice day ~ more snow in the UK today but not this far South ~ Warm SNOWMAN Hugs ! BRIAN (It's me in a Snuggly Snowman Suit for the Fancy dress Party on Christmas Eve ~ SNUGGLY BRIAN ~ The Snowman ! @@@@@@@

          • FredPeyer

            Brian, in your comment you said 'Lunes are like Tunes', so would you consider these 'Loony Tunes'?

          • orchidee

            A fine write Brian. I know naughty joke about snowman and a carrot. But I can't tell it. I will swoon before the end!
            Meanwhile - people going about with no coats on this weather! They will freeze to death.

          • ZIGGY

            Hi there good to read your work I was never able to write in any other style except my own to a tip of my hat to you made me smile ,,,,,cheers



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