I used to write from a place so dark
after the holidays, maybe I'm doomed to repeat
So right now I'll revel in love and reflection
And focus on family and our joy quite replete
Even though winter is often the culprit
of what seems to be a never ending type of sorrow
I am also aware that I will not give it strength
I will not give it another second of my life to borrow
I have recently pushed through and
made a few more gains on my anxiety
But anxious or not, Christmas is almost here
and making it happen for people is important to me
So, putting on hold my thoughts of uncertainty
And trying out all of my newfound liberties
This happy feeling is the only gift I need
For however long it lasts, this moment I choose to seize
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Christina (Pseudonym) (
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Beautiful, Christina. Absolutely beautiful. One of your best and one of my favorites. Your ability to overcome, even if temporary, is amazing to me and speaks volumes of your character. I love how you put priorities and joys of others, before your own feelings. Cherish this time of peace of happiness. Thank you for sharing.
I thank you so much for your complimentary reply, SM! I hesitated on posting, so I'm glad you liked it! I appreciate your support so much. Your reply made me very happy! Definitely am taking time out to cherish, like you said, this important time. Thanks again!-Christina
Well written and expressed
Thank you Tony!
Welcome
Very good attitude to life.
Thanks so much M&M for reading and replying to my poem. Very much appreciated!
Another super write Christina
I really appreciate it Michael! 🙂
WOW CHRISTINA ~ Love this Poem and all the comments you have received to date~ they echo my sentiments on reading it ! beautiful in Structure (Quatrains with a consistent Rhyming pattern (xaxa xbxb etc) and plenty of Rhythm !) I also love the positivity in the Subject ~ STANZA 1. Transition from Dark to Light and from Sorrow to Joy ~ AMEN ! S 2. Banish the Winter Blues ~ HALELUJAH ! S 3. Overcoming Anxiety for the sake of CHRISTMAS (and CHRIST !) ~ AWESOME ! S 4. Uncertainty ~ ON HOLD and LIBERTY ~ ON GOING ! Result HAPPINESS ~ THANK THE LORD THAT YOU'VE BEEN BLESSED ~ WITH MORE THAN YOUR SHARE OF ~ HAPPINESS ! CARPE DIEM ! This Poem has made me so so Happy Angel that I'm crying with JOY ~ I am praying that this mood will last into the NEW YEAR & BEYOND ~ AMEN ~ Christmas Hugs & Brotherly Kisses BRIAN XOXOX
Thank you so much Brian! I really appreciate your feedback and support! I am glad that it has made you happy! So I am happy! You and I both hope this mood lasts quite a long time. Thanks for just being you! Christmas hugs back--Christina
May your positivity last long past the holidays and set a trend for the new year Christina. It is a festive season.
Thank you AP! I truly appreciate your read and your very kind feedback! Thanks again!
Great poem, Christina! Just think, if you can do it now (put aside your anxiety problems) you know you can do it again, and again....
Thanks fred! I sure hope you are right! Thanks for the advice. I appreciate it!
Wonderful positive write, you are definitely heading the write way, these positive thoughts and ways will soon become the norm and your anxiety WILL become a thing of the past.
Thank you GF! I surely hope that what you say is true! Seems to be working. Thanks for the kind advice!
Keep fighting, keep writing, don't stop.
Thank you! I appreciate the read and the kind reply!
i put my feelings on hold for a while,christmas is here,i must wear that happy face
Yeah, I try. I just wrote a christmas poem, LOL! Thanks for the read and your kind reply!
always a pleasure,,have a merry christmas
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