Boisterous.
Foaming with wildness
white banks of turbulence.
Racing up beachward,
an ocean unloads.
Boisterous motion,
bouncing with fervour.
Explosions discharging
as froth overflows.
Seized with a madness,
sea spitting pebbles.
Sand and weed shaken
like rats in the air.
Tumbling excitement
breakers rise restless.
Desperately try flinging
drops from their hair.
Wind-force increasing,
boats now are harboured.
Diving, brave seagulls
dip nearer the waves.
Bowl of sky empties,
clouds drifting starboard.
Wet-coloured mist
mixes water with greys.
As tides on this coast
are known for implosion
dicing no more
with risk homeward I go.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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My Dear Poetess Fay...
Super write! The metaphors
create an imagery as explosive as that
unloading ocean!
Worth reading many times!
Brilliant!
Very good write Fay, I was there with you l
A fine write again Fay.
You describe the boisterous moment of the sea so powerful and beautiful.
A picture painted dear Fay.
I could feel the spray ... Fay! A beauty.
Thanks for sharing ~ I have experienced you Poem on holiday in Tintagel (Cornwall) and it is awesome ~ just as you describe it ~ Beautiful Poem 'n Pic ~ Yours BRIAN
fay,you always paint such lovely images with your words
Watching the waves crash on the beach is magical and awesome. Your poem is the same, Fay! So well written, it leaves lasting impressions on the mind of the reader.
brilliant fay! 🙂 i especially love these lines
Seized with a madness,
sea spitting pebbles.
Sand and weed shaken
like rats in the air.
Tumbling excitement
breakers rise restless.
Desperately try flinging
drops from their hair.
i love your use of words! a bit similar to another one of yours.. very good.. i enjoyed
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