TORRE PENDENTE DE PISA ~ ITALIA
NOTTE LUNA PIENA
IL VENTO NEL MI CUORE
VUOTO SOFFIA !
tonight ~ the moon is full
but ~ the wind is blowing
through my empty heart !
NEL VECCHIO TEMPIO
POTREI AVER PREGATO
SENZA SAPERLO ?
in the old temple
without knowing it
I could have been praying ?
SOLE AL TRAMONTO
SFIORA L'ANTICO SPECCHIO
ARCOBALENI !
the setting sun
caresses an old mirror
everywhere ~ rainbows
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Amore BRIAN
When I write (or translate) HAIKU in languages other than
English please forgive me if they end up as "three liners"
not classical UK HAIKU SYLLABIC FORM 5 7 5 ~ OK.
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BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
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beautiful view, beautiful poem
GRAZIE M e M ~ Pleased you liked both ! The Leaning Tower is awesome ~ but it won't fall over ! Haiku in other languages (especially JAPANESE !) always look beautiful. When kids are learning languages I always encourage them to write HAIKU & SENRYU (three liners !) to appreciate both the beauty and sound of the written word ~ Abbracci de Natale ~ BRIAN @@@@@@@
okay by me - they're all gems.
GRAZIE MICHAEL ~ Italy is very Photogenic and Italian HAIKU and SENRYU
"sono tutti pearli" BRIAN
Good three liners Brian.
I would get somebody to sort out that building though.
GRAZIE ANDY ~ PLEASED YOU ENJOYED THEM ! Il Torre Pendente de PISA is a massive tourist attraction ~ I have visited it about four times and it never fails to impress ! It reinforces the message of building on good FOUNDATIONS. I have been up it but that was stopped to prevent its demise ! Millions of EUROS have been spent to underpin it because of its "curiosity" value. The Italians consider it "sorted" ! ARRIVEDERCI BRIAN !
Great pic, and even greater writing!
Buonasera Mio Caro Amico BRIAN...
Grazie Mille per la dedicazione! Sei Un amore! Very kind and thoughtful of you to write and dedicate this beautiful haiku to me! I remember well the romantic nights...the moonlit sky of my Pisa nights...of long ago where everywhere I looked, rainbows 🌈🌈I did see! Thank you for the memories my friend! Those memories are loving and precious never to be forgotten! It is uncanny how you chose to write the haiku about the Leaning Tower of Pisa without knowing my connection to Pisa! My maternal grandmother lived there. A few of my best years were spent in Pisa! Grazie! Un forte abbraccio e baci...
~Laura~
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