Stockings lined up with care
The garland wrapped up the stairs
No place under the tree is bare
Christmas is heaven with you
Cardinals and bulbs climb the tree
Gorgeous heirlooms out for all to see
Watching this together with me
Christmas is heaven with you
Each Christmas better than the last
Maybe it's age or appreciation as the time passed
I'm just cognizant of how it goes by so fast
Christmas is heaven with you
My Saviour's birth marks the day
When people open gifts and kids play
We all remember Jesus, this I pray
Christmas is heaven with you
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
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beautiful poem of happy holidays with the one you love,and not forget what it`s all about
Thanks Ron, really appreciate the kind reply! Yes, I always try to include the reasons for the season!
It sings of fun and reflective merriment - very up-lifting - great write Christina
Thanks so much Michael! I truly appreciate your support and your kind reply!
Very good write, Christmas s special but is more special with the one you love.
Thanks Gf, thanks for the read and reply. So true!
A fine write Christina.
Thanks so much orchidee!
WOW CHRISTINA ~ Yo Muse sure infuse ~ awesome festive ODE ! It has RHYME (love the aaaB cccB etc pattern) REPETITION and it buzzes with Rudolph's Rhythm ~ AMEN ! Your POEM mentions all the Christmassy trappings the European Settlers brought to the USA ! CHRISTMAS trees with lights & baubles ~ stockings ~ gifts and of course JESUS "The reason for the SEASON !" LOVE IT ~ Cuando Tu eres alegria soy alegria tambien ! Abbrazos de Natividad ~ BRIAN
Thanks so much Brian for such an in depth review! I appreciate it! Glad you enjoyed it. Abrazos de Natividad--Christina
Another treasured piece Christina. Let the Christmas spirit take hold in your home.
Thank you so much AP, I really appreciate that kind compliment! Oh the Christmas spirit is in full swing! 🙂
Beautifully written, Christina, and the last stanza is what Christmas is really all about. It is a Birthday party!
Also like the structure! Looks like you learned a bit from tepo! 🙂
Very well done!
Yes, he let me borrow from the structure of his poem, good eye! Thanks so much for the read and kind reply, I really appreciate it!!
I love this!
Thanks so much, thamesrose, I love Christmas. An honor!
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