SNOWBALLS
GREAT FOR FIGHTS
GIRLS VERSUS THE BOYS
SNOWBALLS DONT REALLY HURT
THEY JUST STING AND MAKE YOU WET
TWO BIG SNOWBALLS MAKE A SNOWMAN
TWO BIG SNOWBALLS MAKE A SNOWMAN
THEY JUST STING AND MAKE YOU WET
SNOWBALLS DONT REALLY HURT
GIRLS VERSUS THE BOYS
GREAT FOR FIGHTS
SNOWBALLS
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: December 15th, 2017 02:49
- Category: Nature
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- Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻, Shadowbox15
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A fine snowball-shaped poem Brian.
THANKS STEVE ~ My study of the Natural Sciences gives me an interest on FORM & FUNCTION and as a kid (in the 1980's) it always fascinated me that as you rolled a snowball it was a perfect circle. An English Snowman always has two SPHERICAL BALLS ! Pleased you enjoyed it ~ BRIAN "The Lyrical Snowman"
Swoon! Couldn't help it. Erm, a snowman would have two spherical things! oohh. His head and his body, of course! Orchi would not know what else. (it's naughty. lol).
Wanna throw a snowball, but no snow? No problem. Get a lyrical snowball from Brian, the lyrical snowman!
Well FRED ~ I visited PEARL HARBOUR in March 2000 and I didn't see no SNOW ~ maybe that is a blessing of HAWAII ? Thanks for you comment ~ Lyrical Snowballs never sting ! BRIAN
Anything but the cold - as I have said before I suffer from a cold induced allergy (bit like the reverse of heat rash) and am currently taking full prescription anti-histamines and yet I'm still suffering really badly so talk of snowballs - urk - still a great write though.
Sorry about that MIKE but it is W*N*E* (I always bleep naughty words !) Pleased you appreciated the Shape if not the Subject ! I had an AUNTY HISTAMINE but she emigrated to Hawaii for the CLI~MATE and fell in love with a PRI~MATE ! ~ BRIAN
Wonderful contour poem, Brian! Very Cute! Well written. Haven't had a snowball fight in a while!
THANKS CHRIS ~ You're never to old for snowball fight or ??? ! Pleased you liked the shape & subject ~ Warm Hugs ~ Brian !
Good fun write, but I still reckon that snow is best seen on Christmas Cards.
CAREFUL GRANDAD ~ Showing you age again ~ you're never too old for a snowball fight ! BRIAN
I’ll be the referee, watching from the sidelines with a glass of gluawein to keep me warm.
ANDY ~ TOUCHEE ~ BRIAN
Mio Caro Amico BRIAN...
Una bella poesia! Shape
poems are fun to write!
During poetry month, I
concentrated teaching
shape poems to my seven
years old students! Fun, fun,
fun was had by all!
Grazie!
Un Forte abbraccio e baci...
~ Laura~
GRATZIE LAURA ~ MIA CARA AMICA ~ Pleased you liked it ~ My students are all 17+ and alas as a lecturer in Applied Science POETRY is not on the \"Official Curriculum\" However I do write Poems on DNA ~ Photosynthesis ~ Global Warming etc as \"aide memoires\". Kids love poetry and getting them to encapsulate a poem about a FISH in the shape of FISH really makes them think. It is actually easier FREEHAND than with a computer ! In my experience teaching any age group an be FUN ! Buona Notte ~ Baci e Abbracci de Natale ~ BRIAN "Pupazzo di Nieve"
Sei il mio bel pupazzo di neve!☃️
Beautiful Chiasmus.
THANKS SHADOW ~ Pleased you liked it ~ it is indeed A CHIASMUS ~ Phrases presented in ORDER and then REVERSE ORDER to produce an Artistic Effect ! ! ! Yours as ever BRIAN Thanks for choosing it as a FAVOURITE ~ B.
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