IN ECSTASY
On pillows and on sheets they lay
fixated by the thrill diffused
and seized by primal melody
in ecstasy their bodies fused.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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Good write and pic Michael, and a swoon from me! lol.
Thanks O
Beautiful and sensual write.
Cheers Andy - another quick sketch to start the day.
Oh woe is me
I never gets to ecstasy
I only gets as far as a swoony!
heehee.
Orchi - don't be woed..!
Oooh - love the descriptive words used in this short and sweetly sensuous piece - "primal melody" indeed Michael !! - - great painting too.
Thank you Fay - I can hear it...!
Beautiful poetic description of the afterglow of love-making. Well penned, Michael!
Thank you louis
Thanks MIKE for another excellent FUSION of POEM and PIC. Personally I have always found Country & Coastal Girls ~ very affectionate ~ especially "Lassies from Rural Lancashire !" In the scenario you mention I would refuse or defuse ~ but always FUSE ! Yours BRIAN
And girls from Burma, Brian ...!
THANKS MICHAEL ~ In my I SPY BOOK ~ But yet to experience ~ although I did have Oriental Females Friends @ College ~ very different ! Yours BRIAN
Hmm saucy n sensational. I like the creative rhyming muse by your poets pen here. Kudos.
Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled,"play it on your lips"
Thanks for your kind review - will certainly take a look at your posting.
Pure joy to read. Less is more and there is soooo much more here.
You are too kind - just a shortie but thanks da
Absolutely beautiful and mesmerizing. The third line carries the whole poem, making the other lines possible.
In my humble opinion, this is what masterful writing is all about.
Aw thanks Fred - I've come over all humble
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