The Moon - Senryu.

Goldfinch60

 

 

The Moon brings me light

Its beauty shines all around

Lighting up my life

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 9th, 2018 02:51
  • Comment from author about the poem: The picture is one I took a couple of weeks ago.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 25
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  • Michael Edwards

    Great photo and great poem to accompany it Andy.

  • orchidee

    Yes, good write and pic Gold.

  • Fay Slimm.

    Wonderful shot of the moon Andy and I love the verse too.

  • dusk arising

    Thanks for reminding me you are a loony. It doesn't show. Fortunately for the crater good of mankind. (not a fan of these mathematical constructs).

    • Goldfinch60

      Thanks da, I always try to surprise people.

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      Wonderful symbiosis of a personally generated POEM 'n PIC ! Science cannot give a definitive answer for the exact and complementary dimensions of the Earth / Moon system ~ or how the Moon was formed ! It is much bigger and closer than one would expect ! Venus has no Moon and Mars two small ones the size of the Isle of Wight ! The BIBLE says GOD created a Greater Light (The SUN) to govern the Day ~ and a Lesser Light (The MOON) to govern the Night. Each light has a separate role and I thanks GOD for them every day ~ AMEN ~ Thanks for highlighting the MOON ~ BRIAN

    • FredPeyer

      Well penned, and it is lighting up our lives when we need it most: During dark times!
      Incredible picture! You must have one heck of a camera. Was it taken through a telescope?

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Fred, the light is always there.

        No just a 500x lens on the camera.



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