Fay Slimm

Fulfilled.

 

 

Fulfilled.

 

Love is
like a fine thread
with an unknown presence,
so sings Youth with resentful air
while Age looks on with experienced care
knowing Love never regrets what
dreams turn into, or not,
for self-fulfilled
Love is.

Comments9

  • Kat

    Love is exactly as you described it so beautifully! I never tire of seeing your sweet smile every am.

    • Fay Slimm

      Ah - thank you dear Kat - I always feel upbuilt by your kind comments to poets' efforts - - - love is a subject much scribed so I am delighted you found value in these few words. .

    • Scrambled Letters

      This is perfect

    • orchidee

      A diamond (shape of poem) of a write Fay!

    • Goldfinch60

      A super write Fay. Love is always wonderful.

    • Tony36

      Great write

    • Louis Gibbs

      So gratifying, both the shape and verbiage of this poetic beauty, Fay. Kudos!

    • Michael Edwards

      Perfectly crafted in every way Fay.

    • MendedFences27

      Great actress, great quote, great poem, "Love is, self-fulfilled." Love is not something you receive, but rather, something you give. Terrific poem. - Phil A.

    • BRIANSODES

      Beautiful QUOTE FAY - That is my experience too ! Love the diamante poem you have written to compliment it - Thanks for sharing - Yours as ever BRIAN.



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