GIRLS in leather boots
don't give two hoots for ogling
Men in Business Suite
They much more lika ~ Harley
and a hairy scary BIKA !
For my LADY I would
choose Louboutin or Jimmy Choo's
Four inch heels ~ bright red
designer clothes from heel to head
we don't splash cash on drugs 'n booze !
In Trainers ~ I like
to jog ~ go "walkies" with my dog
jumpin' like a frog
And to keep me fit & slim
I train in trainers ~ in the GYM
Down to the beach ~ in
Summer we goes ~ feel the sand
between naked toes !
Trunks ~ Bikinis we look cute
almost in our Birthday Suit !
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love Brian
Please add a verse to my FOOTWEAR FUSION ~ Thanks B.
TANKAS are extended HAIKU or SENRYU ~ In ENGLISH
ideally 31 syllables in 5 lines 5 7 5 7 7 ~ One always
allows some "poetic licence" with a TANKA ~ BRIAN.
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Oohh I get mine from the Co-op! I still got Green Shield stamps to use up! A fine write Brian. Bit of a swoon with that pic! lol
Thanks STEVE ~ If you had a "close encounter of the Third Kind" with a US Harley Girl ~ you would end up in PARADISE literally ~ Visual EUTHANASIA ! Your BRIAN
Oohh should I meet her - the gal in the pic?!
Hop on the back STEVE ~ Angelina would give you "The Ride of your Life & Death !" BRIAN
She looks frisky to me - and sporty?! heehee.
Booted and suited Brian - back in the day that was.
Good write.
Yes indeed ANDY ~ My Grandfather who is a "Primitive Methodist" said about them "By their suits you shall know them !" Yours BRIAN
Does she have a tanka petrol? If so I'd go haikuing with her anyday - and a great write to (leather) boot
YES INDEED MICHAEL ~ She is a "HELL'S ANGELINA" and always has a "full tank" ~ AMEN ~ Pleased you enjoyed it ! BRIAN
Awesome write
Thanks TONY ~ Pleased you liked them ~ BRIAN.
Welcome
Filled with funky fun in the shoe-line is this tanka dear Brian - - with you on beachware of naked feet to get that sand-between-toes feel. . Great read.
Thanks FAY ~ "Footwear" always stirs my Muse and (in a manly way !) I love "SHOES" and buy far too many ! I like M & S men's and recently in the "outlet" shop there were some black slip-ons @ £15 instead of £60 ! You know what they say about Men's feet ~ and these were marked 81/2 but fitted like my usual 10 ! When I asked the Assistant she smiled and said they are a 10 but they have been labelled wrong ~ which is why they are only £15 ~ I bought both pairs ! Most Men keep their feet hidden ~ but I love to get mine out ~ on the beach ~ I guess you do too ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN
I like "Splash the Cash" and I like this Tanka(thanks for teaching me something new)
Also, thank you for adding to my Fusion!
GRACIAS "EL PRETZ" ~ Always a pleasure to add to a Fusion ~ they get a bit sluggish ! Pleased you liked the TANKAS ~ The concept of the TANKA is that 17 syllables is often too short and too mysterious ~ SO ~ We added two more lines (of 7 syllables each) to amplify (and also explain !) the meaning of the HAIKU or SENRU. In ENGLISH the 31 syllables should be written in a 57577 pattern ~ BUT I never use my Samuri Sword on those who exercise Poetic Licence ! If you don't want to incur the wrath of the PURISTS ~ any short POEM can be labelled as a QUICKIE ! Yours BRIAN
Awesome write! I've never had designer shoes! I like the part about Louboutins and Jimmy Choos! Don't sound very comfy! LOL Well written though. Sisterly hugs--Christina
Thanks CHRIS ~ Pleased you liked it ~ I know all SASSY LADIES love SHOES ! For ~ what we call in the UK ~ IT GIRLS ~ it's all about FASHION not COMFORT ! ANGELA of course ~ being a PHYSIO ~ always puts comfort and posture first ! Love your comment HUGS for Top to Toes ~ BROTHER BRIAN !
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