Am I There Yet?

Goldfinch60

There am I,

Just laying on a bed,

The tests and scans all done,

Blood taken,

And now I wait,

Wait for the blood test results,

To see if I am dead or alive.

 

Of course you're alive

You daft bugger,

If you were dead

How could you write these words?

 

Of course that is one way of looking at it,

But what if it is My Spirit

Who is writing these words?

As far as I am concerned

My Body and My Spirit

Are one and the same!

 

So all who read these words

Just ponder,

Is he still with us?

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 16th, 2018 02:16
  • Comment from author about the poem: I must apologise for not writing on the site yesterday but I was not well and ended up in hospital by ambulance with a suspected heart attack. Luckily it wasn't and I am at home now feeling better than I did yesterday but still not 100%. The staff at the hospital were excellent and I have nothing but praise for the way they treated me. I wrote this later during the day when I was feeling a bit better. The answer to the last question is "Yes he is!".
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 31
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  • FredPeyer

    I pray you will be with us for a long time to come, Goldie! Cannot imagine a world without you. So take care of yourself!!!

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Fred, I am so grateful for your words.

    • orchidee

      Missed you, even for a day Gold! Best wishes as you recover.
      It did not stop your words of wisdom!

      • Goldfinch60

        Thanks Orchi - words of wisdom eh? Have you been at the sherry again!

        • orchidee

          Oh yes, they only seem words of wisdom to me after I've been at the sherry, of course! heehee. I'm delirious then, after one or three sherries.

        • Michael Edwards

          And long may he scribe words like these. Pleased to hear you are okay Andy - keep breathing.

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Michael, I will ask him to keep writing.

            • Michael Edwards

              Thanks Andy - he's a good fella!

            • orchidee

              Oh woe! No one would miss my singing, even if I had gone for 50 years! lol.

            • Louis Gibbs

              Sounds like the stress of your situation has gotten to you, Goldie. Might you want to consider getting some help caring for your wife?
              May you find the strength to keep going and writing, either way.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thanks Louis, yes that was a wake up call for me and this morning a respite plan was discussed with the relevant people. Thank you for your concern

              • Christina8

                So glad to see that you are well and are still with us. Hopefully for a very very long time!! Please take care of yourself! 🙂

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Christina, I will do my best to always be here.

                • Samreen Chowdhury

                  Wow this was quite powerful, thanks for sharing!

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you Samreen, it was a powerful warning to me.

                  • BRIAN & ANGELA

                    Thanks for sharing ANDY ~ I do miss our regulars ! A great TRIBUTE to the NHS ~ I have nothing but praise for them. I pray for people to be healed and GOD often reminds me "Brian I am hand in glove with the NHS ~ in the UK ~ and the Medical Profession Worldwide !" ~ AMEN Trust you will soon be 100% OK ~ BRIAN

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thanks Brian, I too will hear nothing bad said about the NHS, my personal dealing with them have always been very good.



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