THE FILM I VIEWED LAST NIGHT

Michael Edwards

 

THE FILM I VIEWED LAST NIGHT 

 

With sunrise they woke in their bed

and holding each other tight

they sighed as their lips slowly met

in the film which I viewed last night. 

 

Sweet music played - a romantic scene

but then I thought: ‘Yuck no it’s not,

they’ve just woken up and their mouths must be stale

and their breath surely pongs quite a lot’.

 

 

 

 

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 22nd, 2018 01:10
  • Comment from author about the poem: Actually it was my wife who was watching it but I saw this scene and thought urrgghh !! I can't watch films - I get so bored and twitchy with ideas buzzing in my head I usually go and write something - well at least this inspired something.
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  • Goldfinch60

    My first laugh of the day, thank you Michael.

  • orchidee

    That's chucked cold water over things! We both could be members of the 'Nothing-too-exciting-nor-ardent' Committee! lol.

    • Michael Edwards

      Who else could we ask to join us on the N'tena Committee Orchi?

      • orchidee

        Not meaning this personally, but ... anyone very dull and boring, who may swoon at the slightest thing, has collection of cold, wet blankets to chuck over people, etc. People like me in fact! lol.

        • Michael Edwards

          The Grand Order of the Cold Wet Blanket Chuckerers. I want to join!! 🙂 🙂

        • Lorna

          Made me laugh Michael! Kills the romance though!

          • Michael Edwards

            Sure does - I don't think film makers think these things through - thanks sr.

            • Lorna

              Perfect timing for a commercial break for mouthwash. Can't think about life too much or it gets ridiculous......

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              O Michael ~ "Always look on the BLIGHT side of life ~ Lack of oral hygiene !" Dr Brian

              • Michael Edwards

                Having that played at my funeral - thanks Brian.

              • Heather T

                I hold my breath for morning kisses!!! You are a riot!

                • Michael Edwards

                  Cheers Heather - most people release air first thing in the morning - Lol 🙂 .

                • FredPeyer

                  Nice! But you should know that that first kiss in the morning is NOT on the mouth. There are enough other exciting places to kiss, where breath does not matter! LOL

                  • Michael Edwards

                    Sweaty places Fred? 🙂 I'll remember that - thanks Fred

                    • FredPeyer

                      I don't want to go into details, I leave that up to your fertile mind!

                    • Andrew Charles Forrest

                      Yes!

                      I love it when poets who can see beauty in puddle sometimes tell us how it is...

                      Bet you didn't put that on canvass?



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