LAST NIGHT I lay in Her arms
Warm and in a fragrant dream
Our bodies so gently pressed
Joined like two fallen snowflakes
Her fragrance so filled my Mind
Her touch filled my loving Heart
Her lips embraced my Spirit
Our throbbing Hearts beat as ONE
YES this is love unfolding
Developing ~ accepting
Just to lie peaceful in each .....
Others arms ~ oblivious of TIME !
Thanks for reading ~ comments welcome ~ BRIAN XOX
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 23rd, 2018 05:50
- Category: Love
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A moving and romantic ballad to found love - -- a beautiful and tender verse and thanks for sharing it Brian.
THANKS FAY ~ I knew you would enjoy this ! I like to write a personal LOVE POEM ~ just to share ! Yours as ever BRIAN
A bit swoony, but not slap and tickle! But what would I know about that?! heehee. I feel a swoon coming on.
Thanks STEVE True love is very SWOONIC ! Your BRIAN !
Beautiful loving write Brian, may your love grow stronger each moment.
Thanks ANDY ~ Well our LOVE is unconditional ~ so I am sure it will grow stronger Month by Month ~ you know the feeling ! Thanks for your encouragement ~ BRIAN
Ahh - made me feel all soppy - what a lovely tender write Brian.
Thanks MICHAEL ~ For us SOPPINESS is good "When you are in LOVE ........ etc !" Thanks for your comment ~ BRIAN
how lovely 🙂 my favourite line .. Joined like two fallen snowflakes'' such nice expression 🙂 i wish i had someone to cuddle up to
Thanks ROSE ~ cuddling up together (as one) is the best part of loving ! I'm praying that God will send you someone real nice to cuddle up to ~ You are worth it ~ Yours BRIAN
Very tender poem, Brian. And you know what happens to two fallen snowflakes when it gets warmer: They become ONE drop of water!
Thanks for your apt comment FRED ! The point is the fuse together first ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
Really enjoyed this!! "Unfolding love" is filled with so much emotion and makes for a great write!
A moving piece, showing your feelings for angela. I haven't seen this from you before but I loved it! I hope she liked it too! Sisterly hugs-Christina
THANKS for your comments CHRIS ~ Angela approved and she has enjoyed all the comments ! She loved the picture because it complemented the TITLE and the POEM ! We have reached a stage where cuddling is better than S * X because you share the warmth and contact of your whole body (you know what I mean !) and it has no beginning or end ~ it is just continuous love ! I knew you would appreciate it ~ did you like the picture ? Every Blessing in all you are doing Heavenly Hugs ~ BROTHER BRIAN @@@@@@@
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