The Dream

Christina8

We may not be perfect

But I'm so glad I have you

You are everything I need

With a love that is so true

 

We have life's ups and downs

But I recently realized

how much more I fall each day

because I see it in your eyes

 

You are my soulmate, my rock

everything that I admire

And for the rest of our lives

I'll be everything that you desire

 

I feel that with our 

love and passion it would seem

that with you I've found

the one to live the dream

 

  • Author: Christina (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 29th, 2018 07:12
  • Comment from author about the poem: For my husband
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 40
  • User favorite of this poem: BRIAN & ANGELA.
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Comments8

  • orchidee

    A fine write Christina.

    • Christina8

      Thank you Orchidee!

    • Michael Edwards

      He's a lucky man - super work Christina

      • Christina8

        Thanks so much for your encouragement, Michael!

      • Fay Slimm.

        Your dream sounds so complete dear Christina - - a beautiful and romantic read.

        • Christina8

          I really appreciate your kind words Fay! More than you know.

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          THANKS CHRIS ~ Miss your smiling face ~ can you replace the blank with a Flower or a Bunny or a Panda ? I love the POEM it is a CS Classic ! Four Quatrains ~ good Rhythm and a consistent Rhyme Pattern (xaxa xbxb) I give it an A* for Structure & Content ! What we call "Right Proper Poetic !" Love the theme (DREAM !) Look at Your Perfect Partner and two Lovely Children ~ and then COUNT YOUR BLESSINGS ~ AMEN ! Brotherly Hugs ~ BRIAN

          • Christina8

            I will eventually replace my picture--So glad you liked the poem, it just came to me last night. I do count my blessings! Thanks so much for such an in depth reply. Greatly appreciated! Sisterly hugs--Christina

          • Aislinn Wilson

            Very sweet

            • Christina8

              Thank you so much! Appreciated!

            • Goldfinch60

              Very good loving write, may your love increase each day and forever.

              • Christina8

                Thank you so much GF! I really appreciate your kind wishes!

              • FredPeyer

                Judging from this beautifully written poem, you are a very lucky woman, Christine. But I think your husband is even luckier! (If that is possible)

                • Christina8

                  Thank you so much Fred! I think we are both lucky to have each other. I very much appreciate your comment!

                • skyebellasario

                  Such a heartwarming write Christina! 🙂

                  • Christina8

                    Thank you Skye, I do appreciate it very much!



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