We may not be perfect
But I'm so glad I have you
You are everything I need
With a love that is so true
We have life's ups and downs
But I recently realized
how much more I fall each day
because I see it in your eyes
You are my soulmate, my rock
everything that I admire
And for the rest of our lives
I'll be everything that you desire
I feel that with our
love and passion it would seem
that with you I've found
the one to live the dream
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 29th, 2018 07:12
- Comment from author about the poem: For my husband
- Category: Love
- Views: 40
- Users favorite of this poem: BRIAN & ANGELA
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Comments8
A fine write Christina.
Thank you Orchidee!
He's a lucky man - super work Christina
Thanks so much for your encouragement, Michael!
Your dream sounds so complete dear Christina - - a beautiful and romantic read.
I really appreciate your kind words Fay! More than you know.
THANKS CHRIS ~ Miss your smiling face ~ can you replace the blank with a Flower or a Bunny or a Panda ? I love the POEM it is a CS Classic ! Four Quatrains ~ good Rhythm and a consistent Rhyme Pattern (xaxa xbxb) I give it an A* for Structure & Content ! What we call "Right Proper Poetic !" Love the theme (DREAM !) Look at Your Perfect Partner and two Lovely Children ~ and then COUNT YOUR BLESSINGS ~ AMEN ! Brotherly Hugs ~ BRIAN
I will eventually replace my picture--So glad you liked the poem, it just came to me last night. I do count my blessings! Thanks so much for such an in depth reply. Greatly appreciated! Sisterly hugs--Christina
Very sweet
Thank you so much! Appreciated!
Very good loving write, may your love increase each day and forever.
Thank you so much GF! I really appreciate your kind wishes!
Judging from this beautifully written poem, you are a very lucky woman, Christine. But I think your husband is even luckier! (If that is possible)
Thank you so much Fred! I think we are both lucky to have each other. I very much appreciate your comment!
Such a heartwarming write Christina! 🙂
Thank you Skye, I do appreciate it very much!
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