I COME TO THE GARDEN ALONE
While the dew is still on the Roses
And the voice I hear fallin' on my ear
MY BELOVED discloses !
SHE speaks and the sound of Her voice
Is so sweet that the Birds hush their singin'
And the melody that She gives to me
Within my Heart is ringin'
I'll stay in the Garden with Her
Though the night around me be fallin'
And She bids me stay ~ 'Til the break of day
Her voice to me enthrallin'
And she walks with me and talks with me
And tells me I am HER OWN
And the Joy we share as we tarry there
NONE OTHER HAS EVER KNOWN !
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love BRIAN
This Love Song is based on a Hymn ~ XOXOX
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 2nd, 2018 03:48
- Category: Love
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Comments8
Very good loving write. May your tarry in the garden never cease.
A fine write Brian. Echoes of the Song of Solomon. Even that gets swoony in places! heehee.
You can't beat a good tarry - well writ Brian.
Full of the classic presentations of love - love the title to - -a really romantic read Brian.
Very touching read, Brian! Loved it! I'm sure Angela will love it as well. How romantic. Sisterly hugs--Christina
THANKS CHRIS ~ I do have a Romantic Side and ANGELA loved it and all the positive comments ! Hope you day & week-end is OK we are promised SNOW next week ! Brotherly HUGS for You @@@@@@@
Hi Brian,
A beautiful poem on Love.
Thank you.
Keep writing
FineB
Beautiful declaration of love, Brian!
This is lovely
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