NOW FARP THE SHOTS
Fow tarp the shots
in slittering gunshine
rone the hays of revy gain.
In carf and scoat she stalked the wreet
a paragon of grood and wain
Though blision never murred by vist
no falms of quear for fattles bought
by toy of hance she fated chight
which she recalled in scretter rawled
to nurn the segativy tight.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
Offline) - Published: February 11th, 2018 01:37
- Comment from author about the poem: A deep and meaningful poem for a Sunday.
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I don't do thinking any more - it's dangerous.
Sorted this write out by just saying it and the correct words just seem to come to mind. Mever write Clichael.
You\'ve cracked it Andy.
Yes I wrote a piece which I wasn\'t happy with so thought I\'d play around with it and turn it into something different with hidden meaning 🙂 🙂 Mind you I had to veer from the original words in places for the sake of metre. I’ll publish it in its original form tomorrow.
Farping?! Swoon! A wood grite Michael.
A farp brings you out of a swoon quicker then smelling salts. Cheers O
Thanks MICHAEL for a Sunday Morning smile ! SPOONERISMS have always been feature of English Humour & Verse ! Our ENGLISH TEACHER was telling us of a CAT that fell from the window of the tenth story of a Tower Block. Was it hurt one innocent third former enquired ? Oh NO ~ Mister Spinks replied (much to the amusement of the rest of the class) "He just POPPED on his DRAWERS and ran off" I often use SPOONERISMS in general speech ! Yours BRIAN
And that also gave me a smile - thanks Brian
THANKS MICHAEL ~ PLEASED I RETURNED THE SMILE ! I was so taken with the SPOON\'S ~ I neglected the wood carvings ~ Love the TROUT and the \"doublet\" I saw as the \"Demise of the Twin Towers\" If you get a chance to visit the New Single Tower you will be impressed with the Memorial Twin Waterfalls on the \"footprints\" of the original Twin Towers. Angela thought they were a little too stark ~ How could they be ? I am pleased they rebuilt on the site a Tribute to the great American attitude \"We shall not be moved\" However TRUMP & PENCE are not well pleased about the new \"entente cordial\" between N & S Korea ! Brours YIAN !
Cheers Brian - the idea was that they should indicate seaweed but not sure it worked - twin towers is a better interpretation methinks.
Have to stamp out 'farping' on the 'Nothing-ever-too-exciting-must-ever-happen' Committee! lol.
You can't stamp on a farp but you can catch one in a colander - or so I'm told!
i was cheating my fleckfast when i read this, i nearly flew it up all over the mable.
Such writing deserves a motherment gealth warming.
Doe it soes - I'll ard it a wone. Danks Thusk.
Well write!
Thank you M
Very clever and cute read!
Thanks Christina - a bit of fun really.
Fun to read Michael!
I must say , I had to read it a few times to figure out what it was saying! Thought provoking for sure!
~Laura~
Thanks Laura - all is revealed in todays posting
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